Reviews for Boot Camp
ElBellBooks chapter 12 . 10/16/2016
I've been reading your story and its really good, i love everything about it. About the cricket... poor crickets... just poor cricket *mock scolding*. also*trying not to laugh and failing* really "a blanket of sin", really... i love it! *starts clapping excitedly*
hugs, love and hope
from Ellie!
P.S. I don't mean anything in this review meanly, at all.
P.P.S. *face palms* this properly wasn't helpful
P.P.P.S. i can't spell for shit XP
Miss Murder' Smile chapter 21 . 8/15/2016
Pleasee you have to continued it. Mercy, you can't leave us like that :( i'm beggin you and I never beg, I didn't realize it wasn't complete until the 20 chapter u.u
Guest chapter 21 . 8/9/2016
Oh my god this is amazing! Please please update soon
SasukeLovesRamen chapter 2 . 7/16/2016
SasukeLovesRamen chapter 1 . 7/15/2016
I love the first chapter! Looking forward for the following chapters 3
Marxou chapter 21 . 6/30/2016
I don't want to sound rude but 21 chapters in, I've yet to see an actual plotline to this story. Your writing is good otherwise but halfway through I was beginning to think it wasn't worth it to keep going since I still hadn't seen an actual plot to this other than 'sebastian and ciel go around in circles over and over and over until it gets old.' xD
MrazBell10 chapter 21 . 6/7/2016
I just hope that you would update again.
metapodlife chapter 21 . 2/16/2016
oh did you die its been forever please update
Guest chapter 21 . 1/13/2016
Hello can I just start off saying I adore this fanfic. this is probably the 10th time I've read this and I keep remembering every time I read this why it's my favorite and why I keep rereading it all the time. it's literally so perfect with the characters and their personalities and the whole story line is just so great. I love ciels sassy attitude and sarcastic witty comments and how he's good looking and everyone likes him and how Sebastian also secretly does too. I would really appreciate if you would keep writing and don't give up on this because I think it's amazing and so do a lot of other people. it's my favorite black butler story and idk I just want to know what happens next. I get if you are tired of this but maybe can you write an ending chapter to tell us what happens at the end? I would greatly appreciate that. anyway this is a really great story I mean you're a great writer and very creative I literally laugh every time spears yells at ciel and he says like why don't u drop down and suck me. so brilliant. well please consider continuing this or writing a final chapter? you don't have to but again I really want to know and am very curious to see what else you have planned for this bc it can literally go on forever like the plot holds so many creative things you can write for this. like even after boot camp is over ciel and Sebastian can like live together and get jobs or whatever. also just saying I really love jealous Sebastian over ciel it's my fav. ok imma go now byeee:33
AkatsukiLover465 chapter 3 . 1/1/2016
Please never stop writing- I adore your style and I feel the need to endlessly praise you on your ability! Yes, there is ooc ness, but how else would such a story be written? This brings me to my point. As I can so easily fall into being Ciel's character (due to the degree of care you seem to have taken in writing such an amazing story), I do wish that there was a warning at the top of this page specifying the rape in this chapter. Well, not exactly rape but, abuse. It just got me terribly flustered, and I, being the sensitive and easily butthurt person I am, got very angry, and then very scared, and then disgusted, and just... Ew. So, as much as I adore this story, and CRAVE reading it, I was thinking you could put up a warning for us so easily butthurt children. Thanks a bunch! 3
Lunaiire chapter 21 . 11/15/2015
Stayed up until 3 am rereading this. It was just too good and I couldn't stop myself xD make up for my lack of sleep by updating soon so I can read more of this bootifullness
Jada chapter 21 . 9/24/2015
animelover1738 chapter 3 . 8/5/2015
ok sry to keep bothering u but i think once u finish this it would b cool if u did stuff in sebastians pov. like how he feels when he sees ciel with alois and what he's thinking about when he's looking out the window in chapter 4 i think. just a suggestion bc i would totally read it this story is amazing. im actually reading it for like the 4th timek well i'll be waiting!
animelover1738 chapter 21 . 7/30/2015
omg this story if life. its probably my top 3 fav stories i've read so far. its sooo great. please update i'll be waiting omg im sry but this is so gr8 k bi
Rolliebear chapter 21 . 7/18/2015
Love your story!
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