|Reviews for The Dragonborn and Her Argonian|
| Soulfire72 chapter 5 . 11/16
Yay! Marcurio was my first great follower in my game; glad to see he makes an appearance. Although, he's not as much of a jerkass as I was expecting. I remember him always scolding me for triggering traps (hypocrite) and going on about how he wasn't a pack mule. Lol, I love that guy.
| Soulfire72 chapter 4 . 11/9
This chapter was pretty fun, but very quick. I think, maybe, the two-week time skip could have been elaborated on a bit more? And forgive my... um... "tastes"... but their night together after he proposed could have been elaborated more too... if you know what I mean :P
| Soulfire72 chapter 3 . 11/9
Yay, dead Thalmor! I always loved the fact that if you talk to them, you get to kill them. Because Thalmor are stupid.
| Soulfire72 chapter 2 . 11/9
Bwaha, I liked that reference to some of the miscellaneous quest rewards. Lol.
| Soulfire72 chapter 1 . 11/9
A nice beginning chapter, though it does feel a little rushed in terms of story. But since it's Skyrim, it can't be helped, I guess. It's pretty easy to guess what happened before this, Raen came in and saved Derkeethus' ass from the Falmer, and then became a frequent companion/follower.
I'm curious, though, does Raen consider the dragons a "race"? Given how anticlimactic she killed that dragon, it seems just some enemy to be killed. But when you think about it, the Dragonborn killing a dragon is actually a very short-sighted and destructive thing to do. Unless you just want to go the game's route of making them all mooks, but whatever.
Good luck for future writing! I can only imagine how hard it is to write in such a big world such as Tamriel.
| AWESOME chapter 7 . 10/5
Please make more!
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/17/2014
Wait a second. . . Raen said that Nirn and Skyrim are home to all races, showing that she isn't racist, but then she calls Pe'ram a CAT! THAT'S is Raen a hypocritical two faced racist?
| aatroxdarkin chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
| Argoth the argonian chapter 6 . 7/17/2013
Please continue please please please such a good story I would give it 1,000,000,000 stars out of 5
| The ArgoniaN chapter 7 . 4/27/2013
NOOOOOO... IT CANT STOP pleeeeaaassseee continue... This is the only story that actually touches my heart... my ice cold frozen heart... plleeeaaase, please, please, please continue the story, i keep reading it over and over again until a new chapter shows up... its ssooooooooo ggoooooooooddd
| jerrin wilkinson chapter 7 . 4/23/2013
Dude this is a really good story... i like the way you brought the argonians from windhelm into the story... a much more friendly way than how i did it. in my story my argonian assassin can speak the dragon language and has befriended alduin so at one point he goes to windhelm with some dragons and takes it over... he puts an arrow in ulfrics head leaving the city to the argonians and the dragons. but i hope you continue your story because i cant stop reading it. not alot of people like the argonian race
| Argoth the argonian chapter 7 . 4/11/2013
Raen should have an old boyfriend visit them and try to win her back and dukeethus thinks that he is evil and raen doesnt but he turns out to be evil and try's to get durkeethus out of the picture so he kidnaps him and locks him in an abandoned house. Just an idea if you think it's good pm me
| Argoth the argonian chapter 2 . 4/11/2013
Hi im new here love the story but if you make it so they get engaged and then with one of them gets taken during the ceremony i think it would make for an interesting story
| skyflower51 chapter 7 . 1/1/2013
WOOOHOOO! You have no idea how much you made my day when I saw the update alert... I love this story! It proves that I am not the only person who is totally in love with the awesome legend that is Derkeethus.
A great chapter, nice job! :D
| ultimate idiot chapter 7 . 1/1/2013
Pandora mustve looked nice before the corporations turned it into a shit-hole
ive heard that Promethea is far worse though.