|Reviews for 413 The Sword in the Stone, Additional Scenes|
| Arwen4eva chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
This is great! If only these scenes were actually in the episode! Truly fab! :)
| ABVM chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
just found tis story. I do agree that these scenes were needed to make sense of some of the story. The writers just seem to leave things hanging in the show.
Good job,thanks for helping to tie up the loose ends
| KataraLovesAang chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
love this story
| BMR chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Now this is how it should have ended. Good job.
| IslandGem chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
I couldn't agree with you more! The way the writers handled this whole situation was way to fast for my liking. Thank you for this lovely piece.
| Romans chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
they(merlin writers) should take pointers from you.
| kenya1234 chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
This was cute and your right. The chances of them speaking of the bracelet again are slim. I would have liked for the producers to give more time into the make up between Arthur and Gwen. More Angst on Gwen's side. Arthur never has to fight for Gwen, not really. Anyway, this was nice.
| alexindigo chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Excellent A! Sigh...if only we could've had this resolution and closure on the show! The Gwen I love, my Gwen would have said no to Arthur's proposal because of her own principles and strong moral compass so thank you for this!
Am still holding out for the continuation of your S4. :) Thank you for sharing A! )
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
Sweet scenes ;)
| CamelotForever again chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
Grr, I submitted before finishing.
Anyway, as I was saying. My hope is now restored and am looking forward to more from you...even if it's just a scene here and there.
As for this update; I loved the dialogue between A/G, Morgana's lines and the new additional scene with Merlin/Arthur! Brill!
| CamelotForever chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
Wow! It has been ages! I didn't think I would ever see a story from you again! So happy to see an alert for your new scenes. And what a lovely series of additional scenes they were! The voices, as always, were brilliantly written. You have the talent, my friend.
My hope is now restored, and I am l
| arthurgwen2010 chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
Wow! Honestly that the one I would liked to happened... Lol. It was amazing! And I loved it. More arwen ffic please. Thanks. xxx
| larasmith chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
Somehow I get the feeling ARWEN love will be truly tested in Season 5 since the "betrayal" issue hasn't been resolved with Arthur still not trusting and believing in Gwen's innocence and with Gwen feeling guilty about something she is entirely blameless and for committing a heinous crime for which she had no control over! It's as if the writers, producers, and the directors LOVE to sustain Guinevere's reputation as that of the adulterous one of legend! Talk about originality and adding their own twist! This is NOT original as Gwen was NOT portrayed as a brainless, blonde, airhead in the series to begin with! Have they seen the movie King Arthur with Keira Knightley as Guinevere? She is far far far from the infamously wanton British whore of legend. If the writers indicated that ARWEN is the love story then why are they doing everything in their power to deviate from that path? They tainted Gwen's good name and virtuous reputation so she could be vilified and portrayed as not being worthy of Arthur's love. Terrible writers. If only they could look at your story. It'll put them to shame and hopefully out of a job for the way their handling the ARWEN scenes!
Love your version of ARWEN moments! If only Arthur had more time to declare his undying love for Gwen! Damn those lousy writers again!
| whitecrossgirl chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
these were all good scenes; really in character. Out of all of them I expected the one with Morgana to happen in the episode. Whenever they were duelling; I expected Morgana to get the other hand; taunt gwen which would cause gwen to kick her ass. *shrugs* then again I'm not a Tv writer. They might revisit it in series 5; you never know