Reviews for GumWar
Guest chapter 10 . 8/21/2013
please make gimball and tina getbtogether
Kaitox3 chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
hai :
Noire Salvatore chapter 10 . 7/1/2012
Noire Salvatore chapter 7 . 7/1/2012
For EDD, make him have paranormal detective skills
For GUM, make him a thief
BTW I like the story pretty much
crazedfan17 chapter 11 . 5/13/2012
You have no idea of the happiness i felt when i read the second sentence. I really loved the parts when the Gumball fought the theifs & his used-to-be-friends & Granny Jojo's flashback.

Your story is just AMAZING!
tenzaichigo chapter 11 . 5/13/2012
oooh I get it the "b" is flipped!
damntohell chapter 11 . 5/12/2012
well i think the fact that the didnt celebrate gumballs birthday sucks so how about you have that fight since with him and the peo who shot at tina but when he wakes up its a few minutes before midnight and nicole and the family explain everything and celebrates his birthday before it becomes midnight.
jack chapter 11 . 5/12/2012
ok you know the idea i said about gumball turning into a panther like creature well it does not have to be and experiment you can have gumball involved in an accident where a truck full of chemicalls goes on gumball and turns him into the panther creature
jack chapter 11 . 5/12/2012
i just got an idea there could be a story when the family gets kidnapped and a guy is going to experiment on them but gumball tryes to protect his family so he chooses gumball then they experiment on him and turn him in to a monster (not a monster as in the hulk or jing kong but like a panther) and gumball killes everyone (except his family of course) and the family have to find him and turn him back to normal also there could be someone who trys to hunt down gumball and make him into a trophy
jack chapter 11 . 5/12/2012
ok this really an idea for an ending but here goes in the end in one of you stories you could have gumball fight the main villen gumball wins but dies at the end but the family manage to bring him back to life some how also can you send a message to the auther of the knight in blue fur to continue the story please i have been waiting forever
facing right chapter 10 . 5/10/2012
what the fuck this is a great story you shouldnt end it
Nat chapter 10 . 5/10/2012
Yes, do it all don't let yourself give up on an amazing story.(find your muse) Nat
crazedfan17 chapter 10 . 5/9/2012
Also please dont kill the Watersons. I dont mind them getting hurt but killing them, naaaa. And there are also some parts that are worthy of keeping for example: Granny Jojos flashback, gumballs fight with the thiefs & in the school.

And i have a question that keeps bothering me: when Gimball saw the picture when granny jojo was young, the person that was next to flippy, was that flaky. And also who is Granny jojos mother!
Valgornify chapter 10 . 5/8/2012
Loving it as it is now, sure there were some tiny errors but they were easily looked over. The family did come off as a little to harsh but that can be fixed by giving gumball a flashback to how it started and built from there to be how it is now, instead, of having it be starting off at full force. Hope to see this story continued and maybe even have a scene with gumball going to check on Tina in the hospital , since, being shot that many times would warrant staying longer than a day. Could even have the visits with her help keep him under control of his emotions for when he has to get through the coming days after the incident without her. Anyway those are just some suggestions, let me know what you think through a pm or something. Good luck with the story
Black cat chapter 10 . 5/8/2012
Please review soon cause today is my 15 b-day and it would mean a lot to me thanks
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