Reviews for GumWar
Sabere Commander chapter 1 . 12/27/2016
Chapter 1 -Review-

A few questions first, is it actually Gumballs birthday? Or is it just the day Darwin became a part of his family? Second, really? A punch? A smack on the hands would have been believable but a punch? Come on, you can do better. Anyways, it looks something like the family was hit by a spell or something of that sort. It's the only way I can suspend my disbelief to continue reading this.
GhostColts141 chapter 2 . 8/30/2014
gumball's a badass in this one
SomeRandomPerson chapter 4 . 7/3/2014
Everyone seems OOC. The plot is interesting though. I've never read a story this before. I like the whole history part on the Ka-pow war!
Guest chapter 10 . 8/21/2013
please make gimball and tina getbtogether
Kaitox3 chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
hai :
Noire Salvatore chapter 10 . 7/1/2012
Noire Salvatore chapter 7 . 7/1/2012
For EDD, make him have paranormal detective skills
For GUM, make him a thief
BTW I like the story pretty much
crazedfan17 chapter 11 . 5/13/2012
You have no idea of the happiness i felt when i read the second sentence. I really loved the parts when the Gumball fought the theifs & his used-to-be-friends & Granny Jojo's flashback.

Your story is just AMAZING!
tenzaichigo chapter 11 . 5/13/2012
oooh I get it the "b" is flipped!
damntohell chapter 11 . 5/12/2012
well i think the fact that the didnt celebrate gumballs birthday sucks so how about you have that fight since with him and the peo who shot at tina but when he wakes up its a few minutes before midnight and nicole and the family explain everything and celebrates his birthday before it becomes midnight.
jack chapter 11 . 5/12/2012
ok you know the idea i said about gumball turning into a panther like creature well it does not have to be and experiment you can have gumball involved in an accident where a truck full of chemicalls goes on gumball and turns him into the panther creature
jack chapter 11 . 5/12/2012
i just got an idea there could be a story when the family gets kidnapped and a guy is going to experiment on them but gumball tryes to protect his family so he chooses gumball then they experiment on him and turn him in to a monster (not a monster as in the hulk or jing kong but like a panther) and gumball killes everyone (except his family of course) and the family have to find him and turn him back to normal also there could be someone who trys to hunt down gumball and make him into a trophy
jack chapter 11 . 5/12/2012
ok this really an idea for an ending but here goes in the end in one of you stories you could have gumball fight the main villen gumball wins but dies at the end but the family manage to bring him back to life some how also can you send a message to the auther of the knight in blue fur to continue the story please i have been waiting forever
facing right chapter 10 . 5/10/2012
what the fuck this is a great story you shouldnt end it
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