Reviews for Maelstrom of The Magical World
AzureSoulReaper chapter 7 . 11/3/2016
very funny scene
AzureSoulReaper chapter 6 . 11/3/2016
ohhh the big reveal
AzureSoulReaper chapter 5 . 11/3/2016
very touching and funny
AzureSoulReaper chapter 4 . 11/3/2016
nice chapter very engageing
setsuna sakurazaki, konoe konoka, karakuri chachamaru, miyazaki nodoka, ayase yui, for narutos harem if we can add people from his original world then samui and sayuri

negis harem evangeline a. , asuna kagurazaka , chao rin shin
AzureSoulReaper chapter 3 . 11/3/2016
setsuna sakurazaki, konoe konoka, karakuri chachamaru, miyazaki nodoka, ayase yui, for narutos harem

negis harem evangeline a. , asuna kagurazaka , chao rin shin
AzureSoulReaper chapter 2 . 11/3/2016
curious
AzureSoulReaper chapter 1 . 11/3/2016
nice start
lou2003us chapter 7 . 10/20/2016
I really want to see what happens next!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Keep up the great work!
Guest chapter 7 . 10/19/2016
Great chapter so far I hope you continue it. I was wondering if you will add UQ Holder to your story?
R-king 93 chapter 7 . 10/19/2016
It cool chapter.
Nope chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
Terrible punctuation, crappy grammar and excessive run on sentences.

Not a chance in hell.

YOU FAIL!
bankai777 chapter 7 . 10/18/2016
Will Asuna meet Hinata.
StrongGuy159 chapter 7 . 10/18/2016
Cool chapter continue please.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
stick those fox tails and ears up your ass you fucking moron
duke chapter 6 . 11/6/2014
man add more girls from negima like kazumi and chisame
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