Reviews for Maelstrom of The Magical World
lou2003us chapter 7 . 10/20
I really want to see what happens next!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Keep up the great work!
Guest chapter 7 . 10/19
Great chapter so far I hope you continue it. I was wondering if you will add UQ Holder to your story?
R-king 93 chapter 7 . 10/19
It cool chapter.
Nope chapter 1 . 10/18
Terrible punctuation, crappy grammar and excessive run on sentences.

Not a chance in hell.

bankai777 chapter 7 . 10/18
Will Asuna meet Hinata.
StrongGuy159 chapter 7 . 10/18
Cool chapter continue please.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
stick those fox tails and ears up your ass you fucking moron
duke chapter 6 . 11/6/2014
man add more girls from negima like kazumi and chisame
jake chapter 6 . 11/6/2014
man if we wanted to read about hinata or kurenai then why are we reading crossover dumbass
Xilonax Shiverflame chapter 6 . 9/22/2014
More please!
Xilonax Shiverflame chapter 2 . 9/22/2014
Wait... You have Ku Fei and Ayaka in the harem?! Fuck yesh! That alone deserves to be read!
Cerulean Knight chapter 2 . 9/8/2014
Kanji not kange, since you asked.
Anonymous-1.25.415 chapter 3 . 7/14/2014
I just can't stomach this fic, I like the concept, but absolutely hate everything else. This includes the execution, layout, grammar and everything else. The dialogue for example, just seems awkward and poorly written; using elementary words without any sort of adjectives to spice thing up. Something that I'd expect from a grade schooler if anything. Please improve your grammar and perhaps observe/study normal interactions between regular humans to gain a better understanding on how they converse.
lou2003us chapter 6 . 7/14/2014
I really want to see what happens next!

Looking forward to next chapter!

Keep up the great work.
Anonymous-1.25.415 chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
I'm sorry, but NO
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