|Reviews for Maelstrom of The Magical World|
| that guy chapter 1 . 3/6
I can wait for the next chapter,just sayin
| bankai15 chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
focus on your battle girls time paradox/naruto story
| reaping for all chapter 5 . 12/5/2013
Whhy is was getting so good too Nooooo why well u hope update soon I'm so excited to see what happens next and wtf a female sasuke really well I don't care but I'm wondering does she have a thing for naruto or what
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/3/2013
you story sucks. i mean pick one world a run with not both because the way this is going is failing and again sucks.
| On Soaring Wings chapter 5 . 10/17/2013
Oh you bastard! You end the chapter just as the good part is starting!
Seriously please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens between Ayaka, and Naruto next.
| lou2003us chapter 5 . 10/17/2013
I really want to see what happens next!
Looking forward to next chapter!
Keep up the great work.
| bankai777 chapter 5 . 10/17/2013
I wonder what will Ayaka say to Naruto.
| Rezuvious chapter 5 . 10/17/2013
the games cant be that hard... it has been awhile since this got updated
| ndavid chapter 5 . 10/17/2013
lol very good
| Argorok chapter 5 . 10/16/2013
Excellent job so far, please keep up the good work
| Strife666 chapter 1 . 10/16/2013
| daniel 29 chapter 5 . 10/16/2013
I simply believe sayuri wants to bring her daughter to meet her father. All though it'll be a doozy to figure out the circumstances behind her having a kid with naruto besides the sex anyway
| StrongGuy159 chapter 5 . 10/16/2013
Cool chapter continue please.
| pensuka chapter 5 . 10/16/2013
awsome i wonder what will happen next
| uscias chapter 4 . 8/25/2013