Reviews for ShadowStrike Rising
Raging Bull chapter 50 . 6/17
My God, this story had the most saddest parts ever, they really made me cry in sadness and mostly joy, I thought 9/11 was a sad tragedy, but this is so horrible, it reminds me of my Hellish childhood, my father neglected me and tormented my mother like a prisoner of war, and everytime I look at Optimus Prime, I see my true hero, my true father, thank the Lord that my evil father died of Alzheimer's Disease when he got really drunk on his 40th birthday, my mother and I moved on and she married a new man who was now my true father, my true hero, my true Optimus Prime, may God bless his kind soul.
Raging Bull chapter 50 . 6/12
I have to agree with Mister Blakk on this, some of the parts of this story were kinda disturbing, confusing, and not right at al
l, word of advice: Think before you act and get it all right and maybe make an epic story where Batman unites with the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles against the Shredder and the Joker.
Solomon Blakk chapter 50 . 6/12
Okay, I'm very sorry about them negative comments back there, I admit, some of it is good, sad, and, son of a bitch, it was mostly funny and, I'm telling te truth, mostit was full of shit. Meanwhile, there are rumors, in the United States, that there is a dangerous terrorist that got on a plane with explosives STRAPPED AROUND HIS DICK!, And his mission is to blow up Detroit. How fucked up can life seriously get?
Raging Bull chapter 51 . 6/11
What the Hell was that about on chapter 51?!
Solomon Blakk chapter 21 . 6/11
Fuck you! Fuck you! Fuck you! You son of a bitch, I will make sure you have a good job at 711 dickhead, I will never forgive you for this story that sounds like it was written by pussies who touch little boys, fuck you, assholes! Fuck you and your God damn story, it sucks balls just like you motherfuckers, FUCK YOU, ASSHOLE!
Solomon Blakk chapter 22 . 6/11
Really, Douchebag?! What the fuck kind of story is this?! Didn't you retards think twice before writing this piece of shit or were you thinking about which one of your friends has the biggest cock and how will you fit that lizard into your mouth?! I don't know what you see when you're reading this story, but I'm unfortunately reading it and it sounds like SHIT! The images of the story in my head look like SHIT! Did Doctor Phil fuck you in the ass and paid you to write this story the way he likes it?, Because it really sounds like that really happened asshole! Unless you can make amends for violating Transformers and Ninja Turtles, everybody in the entire Earth and even the fucking Universe is going to reject you like they reject parasites and Nazis and I'll be there when you guys actually sell this story on a book to the public and I'll keep say to you, until your ears bleed, I'll keep saying "FUCK YOU!"
Solomon Blakk chapter 2 . 6/8
Maybe next time if you make a story were two worlds collide, think BIGGER, maybe, if you can, make an epic awesome-ass story were Batman, Robin, Nightwing, and Batgirl would join forces with the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, April O'Neil, Casey Jones, Master Splinter, and yes, Karai, and together, they would protect Gotham City from both of their arch enemies, The Shredder and the Joker, and other Batman and TMNT villains, such as the Kraang, the Purple Dragons, the Penguin, the Riddler, Two-Face, the Scarecrow, Bane, both the Italian and Russian Mafia, the Shredder's top lieutenants, Killer Croc, Victor Zsasz, Harley Quinn, the Black Mask, Deadshot, Deathstroke, Clayface, Solomon Grundy, Mister Freeze, Poison Ivy, Mad Hatter, Man-Bat, Hush, Ra's Al Ghul, Catwoman, Red Claw, Firefly, the Dollmaker, Calendar Man, the Rat King, and the Red Hood. And another thing, Karai is NOT, and will NEVER be, the daughter of the Shredder, it's a sick lie that the Shredder maid up, why?!, Because Oroku Saki A.K.A. The Shredder, the most feared and powerful crime lord of both Tokyo, Japan and Gotham City and the Grandmaster of the Foot Clan, is FUCKING DELUSIONAL AND CRIMINALLY INSANE AS THE JOKER HIMSELF! Karai's real name is Hamato Miwa, the TRUE daughter of Hamato Yoshi A.K.A. Master Splinter and her mother is Tang Shen, who was sadly murdered by the Shredder when Miwa was a baby and he, without regret, kidnapped her after burning Yoshi's monastery to the ground and leaving him behind to burn, Yoshi didn't know that his child is still alive until he found out, 15 years later in Gotham City, when he fought the Shredder again as the man-rat/ninja master of the Ninja Turtles, Splinter, he found out that Miwa is alive and has been raised and trained by the Shredder and had been renamed "Karai" and has been manipulated and decieved into believing that Shredder is her real father and Splinter murdered her mother, for 15 years, Shredder has used Karai as his personal assassin/puppet to torture Splinter's soul by letting him see his own child try to destroy everyone he loves and curse his name forever, but Shredder's dark plan failed when Karai found out the whole truth and sided with her true father and the Turtles in order to make amends with her true family, but still, and I seriously wish I was fucking making this shit up, Shredder still has this stone-cold fuck-nut delusion believing that Karai is still his child and his alone and he still loves her, his kinda love is psychotic and full of shit!, He will never give up, no matter what, to get his former child back and kill Splinter and the Turtles and rule all of the crime groupes of Gotham City and unleash Chaos, Destruction, and Anarchy all over the city, humanity, and, maybe, the Entire Earth, The Shredder is an obsessed, criminally and clinically insane, war mongering, delusional, ruthless, insidious, and bloodthirsty psychopathic crime lord and you don't fuck with that kind of Evil.
Zack chapter 32 . 5/8
Naruto sasuke
Guest chapter 1 . 3/18
It was an ok story. That part where jack hears about her partners. Arcee is always complains about tailgate this cliffjumper that . She deserves to have harsh words yelled to her jack. I don't blame jack and a lot I don't care for.
avengegirls202 chapter 51 . 10/4/2014
Loved it
It was awesome love how jack is a ninja
Guest chapter 3 . 7/17/2014
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ugty chapter 3 . 7/17/2014
Hey the chapter was good but the is one thing you should change. the thing you should change is the names of some of the thirteen. i say that because all thirteen have been revealed and they are as follows, 1. Prima the Leader of the Thirteen, 2. Vector Prime the Master of Space and Time, 3. Alpha Trion the Archivist, 4. Solus Prime the Builder and First Female Transformer, 5. Micronus Prime the First Mini-Con, 6. Alchemist Prime the Co-founder of Cybertronian Civilization with Alpha Trion, 7. Nexus Prime the First Combiner, 8. Onyx Prime the First Beast Transformer, 9. Amalgamous Prime the First One with the ability to Transform, 10. Quintus Prime the creator of the Quintessons, 11. Liege Maximo the manipulator, 12. Megatronus AKA The Fallen, andlast but not least 13. Optimus Prime the mediator of the Primes. Optimus lost his memories when he was reincarnated as Orion Pax but regained them when he got the Matrix of Leadership thus becoming Optimus Prime again
Teshy chapter 50 . 5/6/2014
Excellent Job I had so much fun reading this. Lol Love the tmnt references as well as bleach. I had a fun time reading this fic. I will definitely continue on to the others. I think Sunny is so cute and needed in jacks life. I feel so bad for him though. he has been put though the wringers.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/4/2014
Miko is annoying.


A human loving a Cybertonian - Disgusting bestiality.

Xenophobic I am if you think a human being with a metallic monstrosity is the norm...

LIBERALs would say otherwise...

But I'm being truthful whilst your all lying to yourself.

Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
I do hope this is Dark Fic.

If its light sided hippy fic about about love, compassion and other disgusting light sided emotions...

Than it really isn't worth my time.
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