|Reviews for Ninja Shinigami|
| 0-WickedMelody-0 chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
The story has much potential! I wish Ichigo and Hinata weren't related so they could be a couple, though...Update soon. :)
I suggest getting a beta for proofreading. There were a few missed punctuations for separating sentences. Also, wall text; it made me lose interest toward the middle because it was difficult to concentrate reading. It's easier on the readers if the text is separated.
Good luck with your story!
| Apocalypse owner chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
maybe you coul separet the story more but im kinda couris on to hw its going to go.
| HalicanDrops chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Plz update soon!
| lechuza chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
good prologue is noticed that going to be very interesting in the future and that will be another couple naruhina or I personally prefer to be a partner that is combined with one of hinata bleach characters maybe Uryu, Toshiro or otherwise, what good will I hope you decide to upgrade soon