Reviews for Ninja Shinigami
0-WickedMelody-0 chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
The story has much potential! I wish Ichigo and Hinata weren't related so they could be a couple, though...Update soon. :)

I suggest getting a beta for proofreading. There were a few missed punctuations for separating sentences. Also, wall text; it made me lose interest toward the middle because it was difficult to concentrate reading. It's easier on the readers if the text is separated.

Good luck with your story!
Apocalypse owner chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
maybe you coul separet the story more but im kinda couris on to hw its going to go.
HalicanDrops chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Plz update soon!
lechuza chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
good prologue is noticed that going to be very interesting in the future and that will be another couple naruhina or I personally prefer to be a partner that is combined with one of hinata bleach characters maybe Uryu, Toshiro or otherwise, what good will I hope you decide to upgrade soon