|Reviews for Izuna: Legend of the 5 year old Ninja!|
| starharad chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
This is really good and the 5 year old Izuna is soo cute.
When Shino slapped her... O.O
| thesalmonskin chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
Consider me your annoying tall guilt-trippy shadow who reviews stuff even if he is not in the fandom. Actually just an annoying tall shadow would suffice because I'm not guilt tripping you at the moment.
Technically it looks good. You fixed the period/comma resume speech problem that you had been having, which was really your only technical problem. You brought off the cute without a hitch.
And judging that you survive on fluffy sweetness I guess my personal life must be like some sort of vending machine party for you. Like that one scene from Phineas and Derby with Doof and Other Doof and the vending machines dancing in the background.
...that was random.
Anyway, good job. I will continue to read this.