Reviews for Stopped
Jcdnieonrfjksnofjnvb chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
This was so amazing! I found myself crying while reading it. The way you incorporated Zidane and Steiner and had them react... just amazing! You have a talent for writing :) Keep it up!

Guest chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
this was very heartbreaking i cried. you have skill very good skill
Cherie R. Lynn chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Thank you for creating such a wonderful piece to commemorate Vivi. I really like how you incorporated Zidane and Steiner into the story because, as you noted, they were the closest to him. Also, your writing was beautiful throughout the piece and expressed just the right amount of emotion without being overbearing. Great work!