Reviews for Fathers and Sons: Emmett
MetaGamer chapter 4 . 4/10/2012
Poor Emmetts as alot to feel guilty about and he doesn't look like he believes that he'll be forgive. At these he's getting that spanking he's been asking for '
keyuqing chapter 4 . 4/10/2012
That part with Esme laying into Emmett was priceless! I was almost (not quite) as shocked as Edward and Rosalie. He definitely deserved it!

I like how you're portraying the characters. You're very good at telling more than "what" happened, but also "why" something happened. That's part of the reason I like your stories so well.

Knowing your pattern, you'll probably have the first spanking next, then a chapter of exploring feelings, the second spanking, then a fluff scene...am I right? : )

Looking forward to seeing how it pans out tomorrow!
accounting professional chapter 4 . 4/10/2012
Good chapter. I loved all of the interaction. Please continue this story.
CarlisleLover1234 chapter 4 . 4/10/2012
This has to be the best chapter yet! :D I was literally hanging on every word of this. Poor Emmett! I'm in shock that Esme would spank him but I can see where she is coming from. I like how you added the parts about Carlisle being in pain. Its nice to see that he3 has weaknesses too. Can't wait to see what he tells Emmett about the scars on his back. Great job! :D
WerewolfLover91 chapter 4 . 4/10/2012
Aww...poor Emmett...I just want to give him a hug! And I want to give Carlisle a hug too, because he has to punish Emmett, and he hates it...I just love hugging people. Great chapter. I can't wait for more.
Jasper1863Hale chapter 4 . 4/10/2012
omg, esme swatting emmett! wow!

and yeah emmett is definately for it, especially with carlisle concidering two seperate spankings, but he's right, it's what emmett deserves and when its all over with, its forgiven. great update!
Forest Princess chapter 4 . 4/10/2012
I loved the chapter and I loved the little bit with Carlisle and Esme. Wow! I can't believe it's already half way over. I've been waiting a long time for this story and I'm still wondering how Carlisle is going to manage to pull Emmett over his lap since Emmett is bigger than Carlisle, but I feel a bit bad for Emmett because of the two spankings he's going to recieve. I wouldn't want to be spanked by Carlisle. I axiously await for the next chapter to be posted
caseyrn12 chapter 3 . 4/10/2012
rut roo..em was a bad BAD BOY! n of COURSE carlisle won..he sired em..not to menitoned been around a lot longer so has tons of experience on his side!.. the fight was awesome, n yeah wow em totally lost it eh! then rosie starts actin up..n i have a feelin she not gonna be sittin easy for a bit either before all is said n done,,glad carlisle got em to realize he was rebellin but also challenging his authourity. cant wait to see whats next..great job pho
ficwriterjet chapter 3 . 4/9/2012
Good chapter. I loved the way Carlisle stayed calm through the fight, and easily dodged and subdued Emmett. I find that believable because Carlisle has had much more experiance simply because of how long he's lived. I thought it was sweet that Rosalie wanted to stay. I especially liked the conversation between Carlisle and Emmett near the very end of this part. It's quite insightful of Carlisle. Looking forward to the next part.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/9/2012
I like this series and must admit that so far, Emmets chapters are my favourite. I also agree that Carlisle's experience would overcome Emmets strength and Jjasper demonstrates as much this during eclipse. Great job! I am looking forward to reading the rest. -akemei
Guest chapter 3 . 4/9/2012
I like this series and must admit that so far, Emmets chapters are my favourite. I also agree that Carlisle's experience would overcome Emmets strength and Jjasper demonstrates as much this during eclipse. Great job! I am looking forward to reading the rest. -akemei
annsteph chapter 3 . 4/9/2012
I am so hooked on this story. The characters are well written which I think really makes the whole plotline believable and exciting to leave the reader always wanting more. What a hole Emmett has dug himself into and it is so easy to visualize the waned patience on Carlisle's part. What the heck is Rose thinking regarding Carlisle's authority. Man I think they have all gone mad or was it something in the water, I mean blood. Actually you can definitely see where Emmett is going with it since I don't think he has quite come to terms with both his human/vampire self letting those new vamp hormones taking over. The fight scene was well played. I can't wait for tomorrow to continue this little saga or is it a battle of wills between the two, Emmett will be the loser but you know he may actually be the winner in terms of being the son. Anyway thanks for another great chapter. PS you can never disappoint.
TwilightMusicLife93 chapter 3 . 4/9/2012
Wow that was intense. But it was so good! You're so talented this chapter was perfectly written. Poor Emmett he's in a lot of trouble now...
Midlo chapter 3 . 4/9/2012
Awesome chapter! You write so well!
wandamarie chapter 3 . 4/9/2012
wow loving it thanks
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