|Reviews for Dealing|
| wiccangrrl13 chapter 4 . 7/21/2013
ok i know its been a while but i just discovered this..after watching every season of Felicity in one week..lol.. and i absolutely love it!
| nakas chapter 4 . 6/19/2008
I just found this Fanfic site. :) I really like the story so far, and like that you've taken it in an intriguing and different direction. I kind of like the script format, too. I know it's been several years, but would you consider continuing the story?
| NY chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
...shit. Pure crappin' bitch shit.
Write *good* stuff, not shit like this!
| Tsunami chapter 4 . 2/14/2006
Erm...I think you might want to go with the normal speaking, not the script thing. (e.g.- "Boyfriend," Adam sighed as Felicity gave him a guilty look. Shifting from foot to foot, Felicity finally spoke again.
Spelling needs to be checked, all though so far so good. Grammar (e.g. the comma and semi colon (,/;). Tenses also need to be sorted out, and go a little slower, and (if you want) make it a little less dramatic.
All-in-all, very good, I'm impressed with the spelling, this could very well turn out to be a great fic.
Lookin' for more,
| Ninnoi chapter 2 . 2/14/2006
That...was...ugghh!1! (the !1! was done on purpose).
| KBecks87 chapter 4 . 7/3/2005
hey good fic but i hate that you posted half a fic, i really like it but i get annoyed that its a clifhanger that will most likely never be finished.
| Pessimistic Romanticist chapter 4 . 5/29/2005
this is good update soon im thinking of starting my own felicity next season fic
| Pessimistic Romanticist chapter 3 . 5/29/2005
this is a good story but i think you should reread it before you post cause there are some serious spelling errors and that can sometimes make things hard to read
| jim hawking jr chapter 4 . 9/22/2004
good chapter please update
| maricapastorelli chapter 4 . 6/12/2004
hi i love the story so far its really great please please update it soon
| Caleon chapter 4 . 4/27/2004
Nice how you wrote this as a screenplay. Just a few nitpicks...don't take me to heart on most of it. You need to proofread/spell-check before you publish! The only other things I would add are that Meghan's just a little too nice to Ben (she likes him, but she'd never act that way to his face! *grin*), and that Ben's a bit over-emotional...for Ben, that is. :) However, I do like the plot and if you update, I'll be by to check it out. Cheers!
| drownyourfears chapter 4 . 3/11/2004
hum this is getting interesting i like this story! i hope u update soon! and wen u do, can u email me at to tell me that u updated? thanks!
| erin210 chapter 4 . 2/16/2004
I enjoyed your story, please write more. I think Ben will do anything he can to prove his love to Felicity. I just hope Felicity will give him another chance because they truly belong together. I can't wait to read more.
| tv-crazy chapter 4 . 2/6/2004
I wish Felicity hadn't been cancelled, but your fic makes it a bit easier to bear! Please write more.
| karibelle chapter 4 . 2/5/2004
I like it but every fanfic I read seems to make it look like Ben and Felicity are going to break up again, which is the last thing I want any FAB fantasy to have. I like how you're good at dialogue and capturing the things Ben would say. I'm curious to read more, but wary of the outcome.