Reviews for Untidy
StormOfTheNorth chapter 2 . 9/1/2012
oh my gosh ._. It would be AMAZING if this happened in-game...
One can dream, I suppose XD
dark drow chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
love love love it :p great two first chapters, i hope to see more. sorry i have not given you a proper review this time around but i will as this story continues :p. again good stuff
StormOfTheNorth chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Yuri/Rita yesplz. so. bad.

urghh I'm so yurita-starved A

Thank you for writing this! I loved getting an insight into Rita's mind after the groups separation. I especially liked the end for some reason "But in all truth I think you were just longing for home." - I don't know... I didn't think Rita would miss Aspio all that much, but it's such a lovely line from Yuri.

This story has potential. Please continue!
AngelWithACrookedHalo chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Not bad. I'm not sure if this is saying it correctly, but I liked the way you wrote all of Rita's inner thoughts and about her lifestyle. Especially on her little trip out of Zaphias.

I think this is a good story. Is there any more? I'd love to continue reading if there is.

Thank you for writing a fanfic of my OTP. Yurita doesn't get enough love.