|Reviews for Steam|
| Crimson-Butterfly89 chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Rather lovely yet haunting imagery there, a little too short even for a ficlet.I definetly felt there was a chunk missing right before the ending, perhaps ridging the gap between realising his fate and accepting it? However you show some good promise, i hope to see more of these in future. Well done!
| hillbythetree chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Great description! I really liked it!
| niki-nikster chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
This was a decent little ficlet. Usually, when I see a really tiny fan fic of less than 600 words, I assume it's a troll (I speak from experience). So this was a surprise. I assume you took off from the Smoking Mirror epilogue, though his grief and sense of failure could have been better emphasised.
Basically, I didn't understand which epilogue this stemmed from.
But for a thirteen year old, you write well. :)
This was a short and sweet quickie. A little more detail next time 'round and you're good to go.