|Reviews for Ianto's Bag|
| prmoss chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
Oh, that's a fun bit. Very cute idea too. Well done with the conversations. It was pretty easy to tell who said what. The only time it gets confusing is:
"Don't push it, Ianto."
"Good… But you can keep it. On two conditions."
I assume both lines were said by Jack. They should take up the same line. You can do something like:
"Don't push it, Ianto." Pause. "Good... "
Or put the "Good" on its own line as it sound like something Ianto would say.
Hope that made sense. Good job overall.
| Maharani Radha chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Lol "...I can agree on that too."
Oh Jack. You're nuts.
Great job :)
| esking chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
Ha! This made me laugh quite a bit. I could totally hear Ianto's voice. This is brilliant thank you so much!
| NormalityIsNonexistent chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Poor Myfanwy, the poor pterodactyl would have impaled herself on a pencil if it had been my purse. Also, what was the Hermione Granger incident?
| wanda1969 chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
"...well it's not really a fiction, it's more like a long drabble." I'll tell you what it is: very, very funny!
| cjh4ever chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
That was fun. Do write another.