|Reviews for What It Means to Belong?|
| The Red Star chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Interesting... Very interesting. I do like what I've seen of Naruto and Orube's dynamic. It seems promising. Add in the general insanity that is Naruto and Will as siblings, and this promises to be quite entertaining.
That said, it's not without errors. "schedule is far more flexible then hours." you use the wrong "than" and "ours". "and you wn't start learning anything" you're missing an "o". Not a lot, but they're still there.
Forever in the Sky,
The Red Star