Reviews for Charred Memories
Wolfstalker213 chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
I was expecting Phantom to come up to the new ghost and say 'Stay out of Amity Park' and fly away with Skulker saying "Dont listen' or "Listen to him' But when chris and amber/ember D: That was sad
Patchwork Dr chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Shit man nice story, but very depressing.
Monkeygirlz3 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
AAAWWWWW I know hes not the best buy but thats just sad
RabidOrochimaruOtaku chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
NOOOO! WHY DID YOU KILL HIM?!
Lady Morganas Heir chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
depressing but goog
Nispedana chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Awww... T_T This was a great short, and very touching.
It was well-written and very insightful. :D

*clap* Awesome *clap*
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Jeez. I hated Chris (a lot, actually) but not enough to come up with something like this. *shudders* Except for the ending, the bold part, this was a good story. Really sad, but good... it explains why Chris did what he did, even if it isn't canon...
DuckiePray chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Wow. A much deeper and more personal look at Chris than I've ever had before. It stands to reason that there's some type of motivation for his behaviour. You have to hope that someone isn't that nasty just for the heck of it. Thank you for a unique glimpse at one of the most hated characters on the show...which gives me just the tiniest of reasons to feel sorry for him, and explain why he is...the way he is.
StormDragon666 chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
Eh, hi, it's T.K. from the fanfiction page on FB (do not wish I put my actual name down here x: ) and here I am doing some Wednesday reviews with my actual penname for the very first time. Here goes.

My first impression was that Ember would return to see Chris and we'd discover she was an old GIRLFRIEND of his, and there was love between them but def not that kind, and that discovery really threw me for a loop. The fact that Ember and Chris were siblings somehow made this much more emotionally impacting for me, perhaps since I also have an elder sibling who means the world to me, and so I could really feel for both the sister and the brother here. It showed the love between them in their childhood flashbacks, in how they were both ruined in their own ways as adults, and on top of that, a good reason why Chris was such an ass hole in the TV show. I didn't watch much of it but he did come off as a remarkably uncaring jerk. Though much of that attitude was probably just there "for the lulz" of the show.

And...I did not expect Chris to kill himself at the end. It seems being able to see his sister again after fifteen years (I estimate) did as much harm for him as it did good. At the very least, they can be together in the Ghost World, right? The same hope you have for anyone who dies: they're with their loved ones now and can't be separated again.

Okay, so the ONLY thing I can find wrong with this in the end is that many of paragraphs are all one measly line long, though this is 90% me nitpicking on my own personal preference. It it no way impedes on the story, I just think a story with longer paragraphs has a nicer appearance.

(hashtag)Imhardtoplease

Thanks for writing, girl :D
Scoobycool9 and Luckycool9 chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Must resist crying... i had shivers... Great story
tray125 chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
good job i like how you did this story i can actually see chris and ember being related keep up the great job .
CelestialxXxAngel chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
Great story! :D

I totally love it!

And the grammar was good too.

It was really interesting.
OldStoneface chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Darker than I expected but an interesting read!
Perfect Beauty chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
This is so sad. You did a very good job with visuals and bringing out the emotions. Good job.
Whiitewolf chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
"Look alive folks! We're going to have a new arrival!" Spectra said.

"How can we look alive? We're ghosts! We're all already dead!"

~~~

Right away that made me laugh. A terrific start! As I went through the story, I found that you used terrific wording that made it seem real. If that makes sense.

I was a little confused, not being familiar with either fandom but that was easily looked over as I could understand what was happening.

A job well done at making a sad ending. I honestly felt bad for Chris, despite not knowing who he is. So you've done a great job there!

Honestly, if I had just a smidge of your writing talent, I'd be happy for life!
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