Reviews for Two Powerful Words
one.twilight.sun chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
This was beautiful. I've been looking for a fic from Mal's point of view and this was perfect.
Phantom Serenity chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Gah, so sad. Tugs at me little heart. Perfectly written.
ebfiddler chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Two powerful words, repeated with powerful effect in this well-written character sketch of Mal. Some really nice phrases, very revealing of character: "he mourned her absence before she had even left." This phrase in particular: "while he remains an unmoving lump of worthlessness" made me think, Poor Mal! He just cannot imagine that his words might be welcome to her. Very nicely done.
Bytemite chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Sad. But sometimes I think Inara knows what Mal wants to say, and perhaps knows that neither he nor she can.