|Reviews for On|
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/8
I don't like the Dumbledore bashing here at all. That was so out of character,they should know that Dumbledore always knows what is for the best and keep their anger to a minimum,they are adults their rants were a bit ,so out of character.I like this type of fics(eventhough it is kind of illegal) but sometimes the characters' reaction can ruin should work on that.
| gleefan2009 chapter 13 . 6/13
love it please write more
| Anonymous Critic chapter 13 . 4/18
Keep writing! No lie, this is THE BEST fanfiction story I've EVER read!
| mumphie chapter 13 . 4/13
Hi - I love your take on the story - please get back to it soon. The year isn't even through as yet!
| uggla2 chapter 13 . 3/20
| Christopherprime22 chapter 13 . 12/20/2016
Does anybody else think something...happened to them? :(
Even if they don't continue writing fanfiction, I hope they're alright.
| Rose099 chapter 13 . 6/17/2016
| Revliledpembroke chapter 13 . 6/6/2016
Funny, the chapter you promise to update better was from 4 years ago.
| Padfootette chapter 13 . 1/21/2016
Fantastic story I loved it and I can't wait for more please update soon
| gleefan2009 chapter 3 . 12/27/2015
Love it please write more
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/8/2015
I really liked this fanfic in 2012, but the name of James parents are Fleamont and Euphemia Potter, not Charlus and Dorea Potter. Yes, they had a son, but Pottermore said in 2011 that wasn't James Potter.
| Madison Futch chapter 13 . 11/2/2015
This is one of the best fanfics! I have ever read! Please finish this and keep up the great work!
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 10/12/2015
I keep hoping this will be updated. You are an amazing writer with few spelling and grammar mistakes and characters who seem to be mostly canon. Consider contuing please
| Iris Stardust chapter 13 . 8/18/2015
I know it's been years but I still hope I'll se next chapter one day :) (Like I do with most of chracters reads books story as they are rearly finnished...)
| Universal creature chapter 13 . 7/5/2015