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Rose099 chapter 13 . 6/17
Update
Revliledpembroke chapter 13 . 6/6
Funny, the chapter you promise to update better was from 4 years ago.
Padfootette chapter 13 . 1/21
Fantastic story I loved it and I can't wait for more please update soon
gleefan2009 chapter 3 . 12/27/2015
Love it please write more
Guest chapter 5 . 12/8/2015
I really liked this fanfic in 2012, but the name of James parents are Fleamont and Euphemia Potter, not Charlus and Dorea Potter. Yes, they had a son, but Pottermore said in 2011 that wasn't James Potter.
Madison Futch chapter 13 . 11/2/2015
This is one of the best fanfics! I have ever read! Please finish this and keep up the great work!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 10/12/2015
I keep hoping this will be updated. You are an amazing writer with few spelling and grammar mistakes and characters who seem to be mostly canon. Consider contuing please
Iris Stardust chapter 13 . 8/18/2015
I know it's been years but I still hope I'll se next chapter one day :) (Like I do with most of chracters reads books story as they are rearly finnished...)
Universal creature chapter 13 . 7/5/2015
Wonderful
Universal creature chapter 12 . 7/5/2015
Nice chapter
Universal creature chapter 11 . 7/5/2015
Wonderful chapter
Universal creature chapter 10 . 7/4/2015
Wonderful
Universal creature chapter 9 . 7/4/2015
Nice reactions
Universal creature chapter 8 . 7/4/2015
Wonderful chapter
Universal creature chapter 7 . 7/4/2015
Nice
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