Reviews for Bride's Problem
adol114 chapter 1 . 2/13
i like it
1529 chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
This is good as is, but it would be better if it was turned into a full-length story.
Madhatter1981 chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Short and sweet would have liked to see what Molly did since her plan to uses Harry as a sugar daddy fell through. Other than that great.


PS One other thing that bug me slightly; why'd it take so long for Fluer's vela heritage to show true?
misto713 chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
I think I'm going to be sick. That was the most disgusting thing I've seen in a very long time.

So, Harry was brutally raped, then brainwashed/put under a compulsion, then that abomination that used to be Harry managed to snare his old childhood friend into the trap, almost killed or killed his other friend, while also managing to murder over 200 people and do countless property damage. And he wasn't even stopped or punished. Or cured and put back together, for that matter. His free will was stolen from him, as was his future and the girl he thought he loved.

Why is this marked as Romance? It should be Horror.
Engrprince chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Excellent short AU story
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
I liked it! But poor Bill.
bobcox26 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Love the story, love more of it too
edboy4926 chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Awesome story
Sleeper 3173 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Well that was different, but still an enjoyable read.
ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
i loved loved was great.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
love this
Penny is wise chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Awesome story.
Hoppy159 chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Like the story, very short and to the point. The idea could have made a great longer story...
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Very well don!
That was fun to read!
Also the pairing is quite acceptable!

Thanks for your time and story!
afan chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
1)- The pairings are always interesting.
2)- You have the talent to make a great extended fic out of this.
3)- Sadly, this site will not accept it's posting for more than a few months
before it is reported and deleted. Alas, alac.
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