Reviews for Serendipity
Amanda chapter 3 . 8/27
Omg. That was a dark ending. I'm crying my eyes out. That was amazing. Absoloutly beautifully written. Gah, Damon. My baby. Oh. I know what he did was wrong, like rape and stuff but oh God. My Damon. Damn you Elena. Who's gonna help your bloodthirst now? He should have let Klaus get you. Damn. I realize he killed your family but damn. I mean, HE WAS SORRY. HE LOVED YOU. HE WAS HOPEFUL. And you ruined it. Gah love the story
Salvatoreboys4ever chapter 3 . 6/20
OMG that was such a loaded chapter. From them being so close and really comfortable with each other to one talk about her turning and then just like that everything changes and then him actually respecting her wishes to not have sex and then pulling away entirely. Then everything with Klaus and her almost going to kill Damon I had my heart in my throat! Then Klaus being right there and Damon saving her and her saving him and him setting her free. It was all so powerful and SO just wow. And then her not leaving and wanting him and their kiss was just OMG so beautiful. I had been waiting through his whole story for that kiss! But for her to see the watch was like ice in my veins. Just heart stopping bombshell. Incredible storytelling. I hated and loved the end too. SO heartwrenching and I really wish you would write a alternate ending. Just wow.
Salvatoreboys4ever chapter 2 . 6/20
Well its so nice to see Damon is starting to be much more gentle and actually seeing her and paying attention to her. You can see him softening. Her nightmare she lived through of her family dying sounds horrific and now being held hostage by a vampire must be insane for her. Yet it looks like she is starting to slowly see him differently too. Great job!
Salvatoreboys4ever chapter 1 . 6/20
I wasn't sure if I could keep reading. It was pretty dark for me but I am hoping to see a different side to him. Maybe that will happen and she will see him as more than a monster. But I can't imagine how hopeless and empty she must feel. Its hard to read how empty she is becoming. He had got to have a heart in there somewhere still?
angeldemons chapter 3 . 4/11
My goodness...
Arent u genius...
Its just breath-taking...wat a beautiful love story...ur writing is so good...its like a song...a painting... So musical...
I hate the tragic ending...but i think thats the beauty of your story! Loved it...can u write more stories like this plz...
Bug chapter 3 . 3/8
Saissister chapter 3 . 2/28
Have you considered writing an alternate ending?
Guest chapter 3 . 8/3/2016
Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2016
Ahhhhhhhh he RAAPED HERR!
HermioneMalfoy chapter 3 . 2/25/2016
nice story but don't kill of Damon
Molls chapter 1 . 1/9/2016
Omg! Hands down the best fanfiction I've ever read, despite the tragic ending. You're an incredible writer. I loved the subtle changes in Damon and Elena's feelings towards one another. Amazing.
Raj chapter 3 . 11/19/2015
Haha I loved it to bits! It was amazing! Though I'd have liked either A. Damon and Elena dying together or B. Them riding off into the sunset, this ending was goodz too. Honestly. Best dark fanfic I've read! You go girl!
Guest chapter 3 . 8/4/2015
This was honestly one of the best stories I've ever read. It made me feel so many different emotions, and it was extremely well-written. I spent over 2 hours reading it, not aware that so much time has passed because I was so caught up in it. I also really liked how you changed the back stories a bit instead of just sticking to the ones the TV show has, it was refreshing. I would really like to see more.
Shhh-FanGirl chapter 3 . 7/8/2015
I loved this story. But I hate the ending. And I love it at the same time. It's beautiful and fitting so I love it, but it's heartbreaking so I hate it.
LGZSPECCY chapter 1 . 5/12/2015
Awesome story!
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