Reviews for Project: GuardianAngel
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2017
helo, i em jordan end i em 2 yers old
this wuz gut stori but mi mom tel me it to much blood
pls next tim make les blood so i ken jek off mi dicc at this
Downhillrabbit6 chapter 1 . 2/6/2017
Ahh, the wait will never end.
AddictedDucky chapter 1 . 1/25/2016
Indeed what will he do xD
ManGuyDude chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
Are you going to continue this because its been over 2 years.
manguydude chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
This fanfic is great! please continue it because i love killing floor
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
(baker2032/dakotabaker72) be cool if you continued this.
chrystoph chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Nice story, I would like to see you continue. Now, for my criticisms. Please take these positively, as I would like to see you improve. First, you need to stay in one tense. I would suggest past tense. Second, learn to read your story as if you don't already know it. This will allow you to see errors like the word here when you mean her. Try reading it out loud. Lastly, try to keep to one thought per sentence. It is better to use several sentences to describe something than to jumble. Good luck, and hope to hear from you again.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
All things considered, I'm looking forward to the rest of this story. Even if it's a tad cliche, that hasn't stopped any other good stories, eh?
mr.tophat3 chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
please sir, may i have more
mr.tophat chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
more. This story is to awesome to end there, please it needs more