|Reviews for Subtle as a Steamroller|
| JaliceAZ chapter 2 . 12/5/2013
| CelticGrace chapter 11 . 6/14/2013
*squee* I so needed this LOL
| KoteDiM chapter 10 . 3/23/2013
Can't wait to read the next chapter - I'm completely in love with this fanfic. Keep up the good work
| CelticGrace chapter 10 . 3/16/2013
"The reason that you can't go is that you in black tie would just be too damn distracting."
Truer words have never been spoken. Yummy.
| KoteDiM chapter 9 . 3/7/2013
I just found this fic today, but I've caught up and I really enjoy it. Your writing is very nice, and I love the pace you are setting - not too fast, and not too slow. Also.. I especially enjoyed two scenes, you've used so far. The one where James asks if Shepard has seen his ass lately and tells her that Cortez has rated it, and more recently, when Shepard says after Omega that she hasn't been diving to the bottom of the ocean the entire time she's been gone..
All in all, you've really got something good going here, and I look forward to all future chapters :)
| Hailey-Stone chapter 9 . 2/22/2013
| SurvivorHawke chapter 8 . 2/2/2013
Wasnt Shepard Indoctrinated by Leviathian?
| CelticGrace chapter 9 . 1/26/2013
I really can't decide who I like more: James Shepard or Hackett Shepard. Both are beyond adorable when you write them :D
| East Coast Ryder chapter 9 . 1/26/2013
I've been loving this story since the beginning; it's brilliant. I do want to comment, however, on some of the Spanish in this chapter. If you're asking "Are you okay?" especially if you're in an intimate relationship with the person you're talking to, or if you're even just on a first-name basis, you would use the informal "¿Estás bien?" The other one is "yo prometo." Though, yes, it means "I promise", you would want to use "yo te prometo": "I promise you."
I love the interaction between the two of them in this chapter; they play off each other very well.
| Donna.Noir23 chapter 8 . 1/9/2013
Ahhh James Vega is the hottest fictional character ever. Loved this please continue
| CelticGrace chapter 8 . 1/2/2013
Ack! They are so adorable!
| PestoMonkey chapter 8 . 1/2/2013
I love the tension during the Leviathan mission. Just imagine having to be the guy waiting for Shepard while she's miles beneath the ocean. But my favorite part was the ending. I wonder how he's making use of their time... hmmm... :)
| PestoMonkey chapter 7 . 12/26/2012
Vega is so irreverent I just love him. :D
| CelticGrace chapter 7 . 12/21/2012
*sigh* seriously. where was this in-game? I feel cheated!
| CyanB chapter 7 . 12/21/2012
Vega comes in at a solid 9.
I always enjoy your work.