|Reviews for What Brought Combo to the K.I. Tournament|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
Not bad, but it could be better. Keep an eye on your grammar.
Just to let you know, Cinder was the result of a chemical accident, not Riptor. Riptor was bred by combining human and reptilian DNA. Also, while Combo certainly did cheat, it was through cybernetic augmentation. My biggest issue with the fic, though, is that the characters feel absolutely lifeless. When Combo sees a dinosaur, he doesn't even bat an eye.
| Android-J chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
Interesting, I like it. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
| ZRO4825 chapter 1 . 3/11/2004
Hehe...sounds to me like something Combo would do. Another good story. Have you thought of maybe doing the rest of the character's? Or at least continuing these stories?
| It's Dead Jim chapter 1 . 6/13/2002
Are you a TJ Combo fan? I liked him in KI 1 and KI 2! Nicely done story. I liked it alot.