Reviews for A Magician's Chronicle
Lusaphira chapter 6 . 5/6/2013
A very interessant story, about the past of Marisa.
I like your style, even if Englis is not my maternal language. Decription are good, and I like the Relationship between teacher and student.

Honestly, I've read this tale to see Mima. I love her so much, and she appears in all my stories. Glad to see someone who thins she deserves more.
Timeskipper1 chapter 6 . 10/24/2012
"Yuuka Kazami" a strong name? Mmmhhh... didn't it mean "Fragrance Weathervane" or something of the sort? It's not exactly a threatening name. More like a "honey-trap" name. You'd never expect perfume or weathervanes to be dangerous, would you? And yet...

Weell, apart from that, not bad. But who might be this big mean youkai who bullies Yuuka? Yukari? Nah, I don't think. Oh, well. Too bad.

Not much else to say, this chapter was... plain, at least to me. It's good that you got back on this fic, though. Even if it needs more Marisa. There's never enough Marisa. Never.
FeeptheNinja chapter 3 . 7/21/2012
... okay, i'd be lying through my teeth if i said i didn't cry right there. ;-;

but it's a good sort of cry.

Ahem, uh, anyway, I really, really, /really/ like this fic. *subscribes and favorites*
Azure Xuchilbara chapter 5 . 6/15/2012
Oh man, way to pull a fast one there at the end...

Typical Marisa behavior, haha

Reimu is not going to be happy being left in the dirt like that after she catches up with the Black-White...

Kudos on a great job as always...
Azure Xuchilbara chapter 4 . 6/15/2012
First off, I apologize for the lack of reviewing since I have been very busy with work and whatnot...

That out of the way, you did a great job on the emotional reaction of Marisa if she never recovered from her backspark...

I can almost picture her panicking and Mima's worried face trying to calm her down...

Lastly, you should do that "Mima x Yuyuko" story if you have the time...

Maybe add in a certain Gap-Hag as the object of Mima's jealously
Sonanoka21093 chapter 5 . 6/13/2012
Jeez, way to take out the miko! Good job, Marisa!
Sonanoka21093 chapter 4 . 6/12/2012
Haha! That actually WOULD make a bit of sense! Goddess Yukari... hehehe... I love the way the story's going, and how you chose to kill Mima is such a way. I find her to be quite the interesting Mima! I always love the more interesting Mima interpretations... Such as that one story with her as a Yin goddess of the shrine, and the one where she was one of the first Hakurei Maidens and died during a fit jealosy and rage.
Waking Cerberus chapter 3 . 5/5/2012
Oh, I love this chapter! I don't want to make you rush but please continue! I've been looking for a fanfic like this!
Azure Xuchilbara chapter 3 . 4/24/2012
MILF Mima-er, uh, I mean motherly Mima is so sweet and cool at the same time...

You can really see the stem of all those fan-arts of the tenderness and awesomeness that only someone like Mima can radiate to a loose cannon like Marisa...

Kudos on the heart-warming chapter (and Marisa's attitude)...
Azure Xuchilbara chapter 2 . 4/24/2012
Ah

The road to being a pimpin', badass magician is paved with COMMON SENSE, ye novice magician...

Haha, I was laughing the whole time at Marisa's answer's...
Azure Xuchilbara chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Actually, Mokou and Keine in there seems to fit since Mokou is immortal and Keine has somewhat of a very long-ass lifespan since she is a were-hakutaku and pretty much just half-youkai in general...

Kudos on this little flower that you planted...A ghost teaching magic to a human who wishes to be a witch is as Touhou-ish as they come