Reviews for Standing in the Shadow of a King
Konoshy chapter 21 . 3/23
Great story line and concept. I would recommended going back through and correcting any spelling and grammatical errors along with several inconsistencies. But like I said, great concept.
Konoshy chapter 17 . 3/23
Sorry, I posted this in the wrong chapter. Meant for Ch. 17 not 18. - Correct me if I am wrong but weren't the coliseum and gladiators Roman? I don't think Greece had those
Konoshy chapter 18 . 3/23
Correct me if I am wrong but weren't the coliseum and gladiators Roman? I don't think Greece had those.
CelticWitch18 chapter 21 . 2/12
Omg you have to at least write another chapter please this is one of the best stories I've read for this movie please
cbrstrshp chapter 21 . 8/30/2013
Loved your take in the story. Not sure if you wrote more after this but you could alway make it a sequel instead of continuing with this story. I think you ended on a very good note and tied everything together.
BooBoo33 chapter 21 . 7/12/2013
Great! Not sure on another chapter ...either way works.
Deception is Decepticon chapter 2 . 6/11/2013
I like this story a lot, and I do so love Stelios, but...the historical faults in this...I know its not really important but I'm a Ancient History nerd and...well some things are incorrect. You don't have to fix it, but just so you know for future references.

Spartan women were taught how to fight, and given just about knowledge on the military as men, without the joining the army part. They could were as little as they wanted...the Athenians would be the ones frowning at any women showing ankles. But Spartan's didn't care, they trained naked, both men and women. But that's about it, well done though. I really liked this story :D
ScarletBreezes chapter 21 . 4/14/2013
Aww that was such a beautiful ending, this story was amazing and wonderfully written!
SpartanOfNovaTitan chapter 21 . 2/11/2013
This is awesome. I like it. Also your OC. Why not try the forum. THIS IS SPARTA RP. Your character is probably be accepted. ;)
Agent007Tomato chapter 15 . 2/3/2013
ooo, game changer... didn't see this coming. cheers to you!
aLINNA VaSQUEZ chapter 21 . 12/27/2012
NO PLEASE DO ONE MORE CHAPTER! this was such a good fanfic and i would die unhappily if u stick with Ur first decision so please let me die happy and upload ONE more chap
Puffgirl1952 chapter 21 . 12/16/2012
Update a Epilogue; but do one with a future in it and thank you!
MoonlitSorrows chapter 20 . 9/23/2012
Interesting story. Update ASAP.
tessastarchild chapter 20 . 9/1/2012
Can i just say this story is amazing and i love it and i really hope you continue on with it
Rose Kurso chapter 20 . 8/6/2012
Very well written so far, can't wait to read the next chapter
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