Reviews for Standing in the Shadow of a King
Kalota123 chapter 21 . 11/28/2014
no don't end it here yo you just can't do that don't be so heartless ; ; please continue
meghanLC chapter 21 . 7/25/2014
You ended on an awesome note! But please keep writing!
Slytherin Studios chapter 21 . 7/4/2014
I love it, I think there should be an epilogue with Stelios and Alexandria's proper reunion and maybe their marriage.
XPatroklosGrantaireX chapter 21 . 6/27/2014
This is such a cool story! Please write an epilogue xxx
Guest chapter 21 . 6/9/2014
WAITT!PLEASE MAKE AN EPILOGUE! LOVE THIS STORY AMAZING WORK! ITS SO ORIGINAL .. YOU TAKE THE DEFINITION OF AN OC TO ANOTHER LEVEL! BRAVO!
Konoshy chapter 21 . 3/23/2014
Great story line and concept. I would recommended going back through and correcting any spelling and grammatical errors along with several inconsistencies. But like I said, great concept.
Konoshy chapter 17 . 3/23/2014
Sorry, I posted this in the wrong chapter. Meant for Ch. 17 not 18. - Correct me if I am wrong but weren't the coliseum and gladiators Roman? I don't think Greece had those
Konoshy chapter 18 . 3/23/2014
Correct me if I am wrong but weren't the coliseum and gladiators Roman? I don't think Greece had those.
CelticWitch18 chapter 21 . 2/12/2014
Omg you have to at least write another chapter please this is one of the best stories I've read for this movie please
cbrstrshp chapter 21 . 8/30/2013
Loved your take in the story. Not sure if you wrote more after this but you could alway make it a sequel instead of continuing with this story. I think you ended on a very good note and tied everything together.
BooBoo33 chapter 21 . 7/12/2013
Great! Not sure on another chapter ...either way works.
Deception is Decepticon chapter 2 . 6/11/2013
I like this story a lot, and I do so love Stelios, but...the historical faults in this...I know its not really important but I'm a Ancient History nerd and...well some things are incorrect. You don't have to fix it, but just so you know for future references.

Spartan women were taught how to fight, and given just about knowledge on the military as men, without the joining the army part. They could were as little as they wanted...the Athenians would be the ones frowning at any women showing ankles. But Spartan's didn't care, they trained naked, both men and women. But that's about it, well done though. I really liked this story :D
ScarletBreezes chapter 21 . 4/14/2013
Aww that was such a beautiful ending, this story was amazing and wonderfully written!
SpartanOfNovaTitan chapter 21 . 2/11/2013
This is awesome. I like it. Also your OC. Why not try the forum. THIS IS SPARTA RP. Your character is probably be accepted. ;)
Agent007Tomato chapter 15 . 2/3/2013
ooo, game changer... didn't see this coming. cheers to you!
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