Dude you did awesome on the A NEW Ally

Are you going to update its 2018? The story is amazing so far.

hello there did you stop this finally ? Your rewrite only has one chapter. I hope you will continue this one day !

Hard to believe it has been 5 years. I wish it could have been finished. But I understand, it takes time that almost nobody has.

Your story fucking sucks it's illogical and not grammatically correct.

I woner if Nukes will be used

Love the story, but for 6 star generals, only Washington and John Pershing (WWI) have been 6 star generals. Just thought I'd clear that up, even though I'm 3 years late :D. -Leb

But it was beautiful

Needs the Doctor.

Actually that 2ould be the navy seals.

Wait, hold on for a second here, I'm a little confused. Are you rewriting this entire story? If so, don't. I just started reading this and it's so good. And what do you mean by ending the Ranger story? You mean like, their perspective of this story? You need to do a little more explaining on this.

Any way, still a good story. To be honest, I'm kind of wanting some 'heated disagreements' between the Republic (mainly Jedi and Senate) and the Terran Military Coalition. And my I make the suggestion that instead of writeing out 'Rangers, Marines, SAS commandos,' and all the other names I'm forgetting to write, why not just say TMC forces? It's shorter, smaller, and less hectic to read. And will we be seeing any Republic Commandos or ARC troopers? I have a feeling that they might get along with everyone else. And didn't you say way back when that the World Wars would be explained? Just qurious is all.

Oh! And I totaly couldn't agree more on the whole 'Disney Star Wars' thing.
Update soon, please.

I just started reading this. It's very interesting. Looking forward to more! :D

Well written, obviously researched... I'm in!

I love your story very much and I would like to ask, why is Putin still president if Russia in this story, but the president is fictional? And I can assume that the Star Wars saga never aired here, so this is an alternate dimension where earth is in the Star Wars universe, is that correct?

If Ventress is pissed off at our F-22 Raptors, she will be even more pissed when she learns of the unmanned fighter/bomber stealth drones the USAF has in the works! Go Earth go USA!