|Reviews for First Response|
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/16/2017
| 1sunfun chapter 6 . 4/12/2016
| 3DPhantom chapter 6 . 11/25/2015
Good story! Very exciting and sweet! I loved it dearly! (ω)ノ
| becgate chapter 6 . 3/17/2015
Loved every word! !
| Puggle chapter 6 . 5/8/2014
Thank you for sharing
| nimagine chapter 3 . 3/15/2014
This is... Amazing. Cute but accurate, not over-mushy. Thank you.
| nimagine chapter 2 . 3/15/2014
Beautiful. You have great skills with characterization. Good job!
| nimagine chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
Love. The language made my eyes cross, but still good. Thanks for writing it.
| Sue chapter 6 . 2/8/2014
I really really really like this story!
| Musing chapter 5 . 10/27/2013
I had a friend who was lactose intolerant.
He spent over a year purposely drinking a glass of milk and putting up with the consequences until he could tolerate it. To keep the unpleasant symptoms at bay, he has to drink a glass of milk every day.
I can see Sherlock doing something like this to get over an allergy. Whether it would work or not is a different story. But it seems like a weakness he'd be eager to overcome.
| Louey06 chapter 6 . 6/30/2013
The feels! Oh my goodness. My chest got all tight this last chpter. Sherlock was so scared and sad and- i don;t know. but it was wonderful. this story was fantastic i was firghtenedb and sad and worried, everything I was supposed to feel i did. it was like a roller coaster ride, sometimes light and amusing and then devestatingly worrisoe. Fantastic job I loved this
| Fang's Fawn chapter 6 . 6/26/2013
I love that Sherlock just whipped off the hospital gown and started changing in front of Lestrade and the nurse. I can totally see him doing that. I could see him doing that in the hallway without a thought!
Sounds like you have a story in mind of what happened when Sherlock came back...the implications that John may have taken his own life after Moran's defeat, etc. I'd love to read that story someday!
| Cello06 chapter 6 . 6/9/2013
this was fantastic! great job :)
| Eve Is My Pen Name chapter 6 . 1/18/2013
I love it! So sweet!
| Heather Snow chapter 6 . 1/12/2013
Nice. I especially liked how you carried each of the chapters to a resolution. Sometimes the 5-1 fics have scenes that a bit truncated for my tastes. Not a problem here.