|Reviews for On Beating the Learning Curve|
| Octavia Brown chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
Hahah I liked it! It is pretty uncommon, I think this may be the only FF story I've ever read, where the girl isn't a virgin but the guy is. Good on you for just going for it!
| V-ChanUzumakiLSSJ chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
I really enjoyed reading this. It definitely had depth to it and I like that the most. Wonderful job.
| D chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
I love how possessive Shikamaru is :)
Your concept and logic behind their thoughts and actions are very good. I really enjoyed the story - it's both fluffy but hot at the same time.
| Little Gem Magnolia chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
This was amazing, I really enjoyed getting into Temari's head and getting her perspective on this. Very enjoyable piece. :D
| Effie-a chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Awesome fic loved it!
| Mei Vir D. Ripper chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
I BLOODY HATE YOU FOR MAKING THEM SO CUTE AND FLUFFY AND GOD! I WANT TO HUG YOU TO DEATH!
I demand you change your author's note at the very bottom part of this page, because frankly, there was just enough lemon to send my fangirling side to bloody heaven! I'm also one of the many lovers of the rough and funny relationship of Shikamaru and Temari, but damn me to hell, if I didn't say that I L-O-V-E seeing the fluffy cute side of their relationship.
And both of them WILL be damned if they don't end up in the manga.
This line is my most favorite line: "but the one place where I would admit defeat to him was when we were having sex." How absolutely Temari-like to say such a phrase. And Shikamaru, being the loving genius that he is, sound so noble as he tried to learn ways on how to give both of them pleasure.
ASDFGJKL.. I'm so in love with this couple I want to cry. You unleashed my fangirling side towards them again.
| MistressWinowyll chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Hot damn, woman! Great work! I love the inner monologue and the REAL world experience of women against expectations. You kept the two in character with a little OOC from Shika, but it was still perfect.
I believe Shika and Temari are an amazing pair, really, really, really amazing.
Congratulations on an excellent chapter! Now, outside of faving this one, I'm going to raid your story box!
| Cloud Envy Shikamaru chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Ha! This was awesome!
| Kadie chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Aaaaaawwwwww! ＼()／ I do believe I've just had a fangirl attack to my soul.
| lolcari chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Cute story. Thank you!
| LadyTemari chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
I don't feel this was OOC at all! That is the fun with writing fanfiction-we can build on the characters in many different directions since they are not completely defined in the anime or manga. It leaves room for our imagination!
OK, I admit I am one of those gals that think between Shika/Tema there would be an amazing dominance from Shika in the bedroom that Temari would welcome as a way of finally letting someone else be in control without everyone knowing. He is a genius after all, hehe.
I love the concept of "the learning curve".
"Honestly, Temari, I'm pissed that someone got you before me, I hate it. I wanted you to be mine, completely, and fully. But, I don't give a damn who was your first, but I'll BE damned if I'm not your last and you're not my only."
BE STILL MY BEATING HEART! The whole story is amazing, but that one line-it just is so perfect.
I look forward to reading more from you!
| Im Sammeh chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
No it isn't wrong, because i blushed the entire time too lol -Insanity