|Reviews for Age Difference|
| Virareve chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Gosh, I thought I was the only one who considered these exact relations between the three. Thank goodness I'm not and someone wrote about it!
Loved how you approached the pairing in a logical way and great layout. (The puts-the-book-down was a nice element to the story that really jit Jinora's character.)
Perhaps, you'll write more? :P
| Enchansive chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
I SAW THIS ON TUMBLR AND OH MY GOD YOU TRENDSETTER YOU. I think this is a surprise ship for the fandom, one that I didn't even consider but I love it! I think Bolin and Jinora appeals to me more than Bolin and Asami, but we'll see in the future episodes!
| HawkofNavarre chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
I now ship this. HAHAHA. Great writing. I disagree with you though; I didn't think they were OOC. I can see the characters growing up that way and acting the way they did when they were older.
The only thing I think you could have worked on a little bit more was Bolin's feelings for Asami. There was really no visible transition from him liking Asami to liking Jinora. Or did you mean to imply that he had liked Jinora for the entire time? I just would have liked that to be a bit clearer.
Otherwise, this one-shot was simply wonderful. Great job!
| deadsylifer chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Ok, ive got to tell you that ive skipped over this probably ten times because i was like 'oh thats just creepy'. But after finally reading it... omg that is so damn sweet! I so loved this! I think its great the way you did it in a timeline and how it switches from jinora to bolin. You did a wonderful job. I think it really would happen like that too. Im going to read it again and make everyone i know read it too. Fantastic job!
| Purple.Slippers.18 chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
I cannot say how much I love this story.
I've always thought that if Jinora was going to get a crush on either of the brothers, it would be Bolin. When I found your story I was so happy. It's so well thought out, and I really enjoyed the narrative; you made it flow nicely and it made sense how feelings changed (or stayed the same) as the years passed.
Also, that tidbit of Korra proposing to Mako...kinda perfect!
| Blue Phoenix Flower chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
I thought I was the only one. Because I just think it would be hilarious to have Jinora pine and then Bolin gets a wake-up call saying "when did you get to be so beautiful?"
Jinora/Bolin shippers unite!
Anyway, the story was very well written and I like it that you did snap shots of their lives. It was well done.
| thecolourofgreen chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Adorable. Just absolutely adorable. I don't know if that's the word you're looking for, but this ship is just exploding with adorableness.
I found this on tumblr. Sent me here. Glad I actually read it. I wasn't initially a shipper of Bolin/Jinora, just because I had not heard of it yet, but it actually works. I like the idea of Jinora having this crush on Bolin because it's incredibly possible.
I hope she really does develop a crush on him, it would be ... adorable. Let's just see how things play out.
Anyway, awesome story, I like how you wrote the characters. Well done :)
| JoPoGirlsKickAss chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Very well done. I really enjoyed this, it was different and original.
| Lost Soul Here chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
JOEY, YOU ARE FLAWLESS AND THIS FIC AND BOLINORA AND I CAN'T.
| DrHoneyChuckles chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
I'm not the only Jinoralin shipper! I thought I was crazy! XD I was all like, "I will hide my fanon until I find someone else who ships it too!"
Anyways, this was a really cute story. I love how you wrote Bolin's POV. It was very nice and quite in character. I also love how you wrote Korra and Mako's engagement. (Or what Bolin thought their engagement was.) Totally could see that happening. All in all, this was great. Keep up the good work! :D
| Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
That was nice.
| This is where my name would go chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
This was so cute,and really well written.
| itshardtostealfatkids chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
What have you done to me?
XD No but seriously, I read this on tumblr and, having been a Bosami shipper, I'm slightly confused because this seems so...legit. Like, I can see Jinora having a crush on Bolin and the idea of them getting together is really cute. _
Jinora-Bolin-Asami will be the love triangle. XD
| bean15 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
So. Completely. FABULOUS!
okay, i was a bit skeptical when i first read the pairing, but I adore Bolin like whoa so I read it.
I have to admit, I kinda ship this now. too adorkable for words. the characters seem spot-on from what we've seen, and I wouldn't be surprised at all now if Jinora did actually deveop a crush on Bolin. Not that I'd blame her, he IS wonderful.
I adored reading this, so well-written too. keep up the great work!
| GrossGirl18 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
There is precisely one thing I don't like bout this story, and that's really more I just don't agree. At that is that I think Bolin would be 16 based purely on the fact that he's slightly shorter then Korra, who's 17. And in cartoons like Avatar, age is determined by height as well.
But obviously I see the need for the large age difference, and the story was spectacularly well-written, and about as in character as you can get (especially considering there are exactly two episodes out and Bolin is only in one of them). I always thought Jinora would have a crush on Mako, but I think either could work, and you make this work like a charm.