... I really like the idea of the Stargate crew going out and finding that the story of Star is already among other worlds; what would they do next?

and Lash was amazing; one of the best and most emotional scenes if the story and that is saying a lot

"I am Mab" quite possibly one of the best badass boasts that has ever happened

that was just an amazing interaction and I liked that line about friends with Michael

that explains a lot actually; I really like the emotions in what Lash was saying

so piss off the enemy so that they don't notice the oncoming threat; very Dresden

taking notes from Ozymandius I see

and Mab is shown to be truly terrifying as is befitting of her... the Aurora interaction was interesting too

negotiations ala Dresden, as entertaining as ever

So, does this mean that Enlil has stepped in to fill Xin's role of exasperated voice if semi-reason?

I don't have to be faster than it... I just have to be faster than you

Even in the middle of battle, they still find a way to have both banter and deep meaningful conversation

*hype intensifies*

I am am absolutely loving your take on Mab and Lea was rather enjoyable here too

I think that I might want to take a proper break before I die of epic-ness overload; that whole negotiation was done brilliantly, I loved the way way your showed all the personalities as well as the severity of what is going.

I mean, Mab just pulled a planet(?) into the Nevernever; that is just ridiculous and the armies of Winter seem like they will be something to see (or maybe not as I expect there are at least a few who would cause madness from the sight of them)

the rumors flying about about Dres'Uh'den were a nice touch too, particularly with the explanation of Bob

the genius loci was pretty interesting and that is one hell of a way to end the chapter... he probably just caused at lest two heart attacks

... I'm going to miss Xin but that last sentence of his was a brilliant send off

and is it odd that, despite the war going, I can't help but be surprised that Harry didn't grab one of the pizzas to take with him on the way out?

I just had to hold myself back from laughing too hard so as not to disturb anyone sleeping; this whole interactions was just golden.
Xin was probably my favorite here with his own dry humor