Reviews for Endless Pantheon: God's Eye |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it. It FELT like Dresden files, even as it dealt with Stargate themed stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() as to being people before, Ortega was a Conquistador. the scum of the earth, in other words. also, noticed a repeated typo. you typed Dutchess instead of Duchess. |
![]() ![]() ![]() iirc, isn't Santa also Odin in the Dresden Files? |
![]() ![]() Thank you so much for this story... it wasn't what I was looking for originally, but you've given me days of unexpected pleasure and I'm very happy to have stumbled across this gem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who is this retarded character and apparently writer too? "Story" and "backstory" LOL It is full of shity mumbo jumbo, idiotic scenes and moronic decisions. Teleporting interstellar distance, time travel, meeting a Prime so fooking far out of his God's city...by "accident". Running face first into shield, solo combat to death, body shave, Gould immigration. Revival by handwave from dual personality death. And so forth. Oh no, absolute ruler has women satisfying his urgesMisogyny!" LOL Gets another handwave Gould memories cleaning from some Fae Queen... Doesn't ask for Gould personality removal instead and keeping memories... Found a girl in bed laterahhh, misogyny" . WTFF... I took over from the "previous God"...so I be a retard and start doing some retarded shit instead of using brain for 5 seconds... Ect... Is this some SJW wish fulfillment "creation"? How this retarded MC could survive to this point? "I know Star Wars" but nothing comes out of it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome move! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished God's Eye, and I must say excellent integration of Stargate and Dresden. Good work honestly! |
![]() ![]() Ajupp. Still as good as the first time and do I see small references to the sg side story here? Didn't notice them earlier. |
![]() ![]() When I first read this. Chapter it left me completely and entirely. Speechless. Marvellous work. |
![]() ![]() Love the unas. Wondering if there is any real good fic out there that focuses almost exclusively. 9n Tham... I would love. Read that... |
![]() ![]() Always a pleasure to. Read your bratac expy. And dang mab is mad... |
![]() ![]() Until battle ground this was the most overall impressive battle sequence in the Dresden verse... And the end result still beats battle. Ground... |
![]() ![]() The many things you hint at in this chapter makes me really. Sad you stopped potential. Will we meet his twin as well, how much did you boost summer? Questions, questions... |
![]() ![]() Aahhhh, marvelous again and again. |
![]() ![]() When you manage to keep your readers chuckling for a whole chapter... You k ow you're that good. |