|Reviews for God's Eye|
| Verdin Grey chapter 25 . 9/19
Reading through this again, I have concluded Ammit is my favorite character.
| gryphonsson chapter 22 . 9/19
So... Dresden in a hydra-skin cloak riding into space on battle unicorns?
...Dammit, now I want a picture of that!
| doraemax chapter 35 . 9/18
Hahaha...Star Wars. How appropriately Dresden...
Hmm... i was always curious that Christianity does not hold God as All-Powerful. Limited. Assuming Metratron here came from Christian dogma, he said Harry had done something the Lord has yet to achieve.. Meaning Harry was more powerful? Hogwash is what it is. And the part Metratron 'promised'... The Angels are the Servant of God... far be it a servant to claim a power of their lord.
| doraemax chapter 33 . 9/18
And the world is changed forever...
| doraemax chapter 32 . 9/18
Damn... i am in awe of your 'world building' skills... the intricacies of the ancient histories of the 4..er...5 races... Damn, the reason Anubis was banished... wow...just, wow... and it all ties really well with canon universes, both Dresden-verse and Stargate-verse. I salute you. Again, are one of your aliases Jim Butcher? huhuhu
| Redentor chapter 16 . 9/15
Big honking space guns...a deal breaker in any agreement.
| CarsonNapier chapter 2 . 9/7
Hi, I'm re-reading this story while I wait for your next update to its sequel and I was wondering: have you by any chance approached an artist to have them illustrate some of your chapters? 'Cause I have to tell you, even if they're character concepts, they would take this mashup of a universe of yours to a whole new level.
| chimera629 chapter 7 . 8/30
Dispointed Lash isn't drawn knowledge from the memories and feeding it to him and surprised that he isn't bothering the tech here.
Does he still have the voice and glowing eyes?
Honestly surprised that he can abandon his new post so easily given how many people he could help am bobs right about his stuff and he is living a space adventure yet is talking about a star wars poster.
Really don't know why he isn't do the smart thing and following lash and bobs advice
| chimera629 chapter 6 . 8/29
So unfortunately he's still ridiculously soft and has a guilt complex
So he just going to depend on lash instead of them talking the knowledge they need from he momories and deleting rest
He should just tell the head servant and guard what he told the good morning woman
He needs to find a solution for his new holdings or some jackass will just take them over and I don't see him being okay with that
| chimera629 chapter 5 . 8/29
Hold on did he actually absorb some of the ritual of godhood energy that of heka?
His new health, knowledge,power not owing her will change alot when he gets back to his time unless it's taken from him?
Well that was dissapoiting and stupid it would have been smarter for the new memories to be made like it was knowledge he gained from books instead of experienced that way he would still have the knowledge and wouldn't be as influenced
Except for considering rape it's not like he hadn't considered murder and genocide hell Harry is a very destructive killer
| chimera629 chapter 4 . 8/29
Shouldn't he know what lash is telling him as he has or saw alot if he'll memories?
Considering that he could take what he wanted before know the tempts shouldn't be knew it's just know he should have the memorial experience now. Honestly if thousands if years of new memories don't change his personality it's weird
Wonder how having the extra knowledge and a perfectly healthy body will effect his power
Hope he keeps some of the memories and honestly it's annoying way he's acting like his dark impulses are all hell when he's had them to
| chimera629 chapter 3 . 8/29
Does he even recognize he in so much danger because he chose to be
Surprised hell sub conscious didn't pop up and that he could still be the person with lifetimes of memories full of horror given to him.
He's stupid if he thinks he'd be a monster if he's someone's puppet or can't control his actions.
So surprised he did t use hell fire or directly target heka wonder if his death curse will still go off
| chimera629 chapter 2 . 8/29
Thought Dresden was closer to 7 ft than 6
I thought McCoy didn't teach him magic so it would be easier to kill him if he didn't follow the rules he tough which he does t follow himself
| chimera629 chapter 1 . 8/29
So rare to find d a story with lash in it I hope what ever he learns he brings home if he goes
| Winged Serpent of Light - BOTM chapter 37 . 8/16
This fanfiction shouldn't have been able to hurt me that much.
But it did.
Please keep writing, and thank you for everything.
-Winged Serpent of Light / Bringer of the Morrow