Reviews for Crushing |
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francicullen chapter 32 . 2/17/2024 ame ame este epilogo gracias |
Bevey99 chapter 32 . 12/10/2023 I think angst should have been the genre. This was mostly sad, but still a beautiful story. Thanks for writing and sharing |
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 2 . 2/19/2022 Slowly but surely working through my TBR list! I know you started this 10 years ago, but better late than never. Especially something recc'd by RobAttack. ;) I'm partial to Olderwards because I was dating a 29 year old when I was 18. I've always dated older men, so I'm really enjoying this! |
MissWM chapter 32 . 6/20/2021 this was nice. you are a good writer. but, well, i have to say i have some "problems" with the plot. the whole bella would throw away her "forever" if she had slept with jimmy at that college new year's party. fucked up, in my opinion. i mean, he had fun. he dated. why couldn't she do the same? specially after he said nothing would happen between them? i can't wrap my head around that one. also, the whole situation with shioban (sorry if i misspell something) is also pretty awful. you showed that she was an awful person. ok. but the way he treated her? that's insanely hurtful. and esme, rosalie and carlisle encouraging edward to acknowledge his feelings WHILE he was at home with another girl, someone whom he had brought to meet his parents? the same goes for bella pursuing him when she knew he was engaged. i'm sorry. it is just way too much. anyways, overall, it was a good story. it made my sunday funnier :) thanks for sharing. |
levityoflonging chapter 7 . 6/13/2021 His girlfriend sucks, but the way he talked to her was not okay. "You exist." Geez. Unless she's blackmailing him into marrying her or something, he was pretty abusive. |
Elle Whitecap chapter 32 . 10/12/2020 They certainly took the long road. I love a good slow burn. I also love your original characters Ry and Dev. I liked that you didn’t go with traditional pairings. Overall very good story. |
cullenlover88 chapter 32 . 9/8/2020 nice story |
Guest chapter 21 . 8/21/2020 Will her parents show up? |
Guest chapter 17 . 8/21/2020 What are his friends gonna say? Is rose gonna tell Paul? |
Guest chapter 14 . 8/21/2020 What did her parents text? |
Guest chapter 8 . 8/21/2020 Bella need to step away. Edward is cheating |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/21/2020 She should be nice sioben even though she is hurting |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2020 Alice, Emmett, jasper? |
Gemm13 chapter 5 . 5/6/2020 Esme and Rose, captains of the E/B ship |
divyvicki chapter 32 . 4/24/2020 Great one! |