Reviews for Crushing
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 2 . 2/19
Slowly but surely working through my TBR list!
I know you started this 10 years ago, but better late than never. Especially something recc'd by RobAttack. ;)
I'm partial to Olderwards because I was dating a 29 year old when I was 18. I've always dated older men, so I'm really enjoying this!
MissWM chapter 32 . 6/20/2021
this was nice. you are a good writer.

but, well, i have to say i have some "problems" with the plot. the whole bella would throw away her "forever" if she had slept with jimmy at that college new year's party. fucked up, in my opinion. i mean, he had fun. he dated. why couldn't she do the same? specially after he said nothing would happen between them? i can't wrap my head around that one.

also, the whole situation with shioban (sorry if i misspell something) is also pretty awful. you showed that she was an awful person. ok. but the way he treated her? that's insanely hurtful. and esme, rosalie and carlisle encouraging edward to acknowledge his feelings WHILE he was at home with another girl, someone whom he had brought to meet his parents? the same goes for bella pursuing him when she knew he was engaged. i'm sorry. it is just way too much.

anyways, overall, it was a good story. it made my sunday funnier :) thanks for sharing.
levityoflonging chapter 7 . 6/13/2021
His girlfriend sucks, but the way he talked to her was not okay. "You exist." Geez. Unless she's blackmailing him into marrying her or something, he was pretty abusive.
Elle Whitecap chapter 32 . 10/12/2020
They certainly took the long road. I love a good slow burn. I also love your original characters Ry and Dev. I liked that you didn’t go with traditional pairings. Overall very good story.
cullenlover88 chapter 32 . 9/8/2020
nice story
Guest chapter 21 . 8/21/2020
Will her parents show up?
Guest chapter 17 . 8/21/2020
What are his friends gonna say? Is rose gonna tell Paul?
Guest chapter 14 . 8/21/2020
What did her parents text?
Guest chapter 8 . 8/21/2020
Bella need to step away. Edward is cheating
Guest chapter 2 . 8/21/2020
She should be nice sioben even though she is hurting
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2020
Alice, Emmett, jasper?
Gemm13 chapter 5 . 5/6/2020
Esme and Rose, captains of the E/B ship
divyvicki chapter 32 . 4/24/2020
Great one!
divyvicki chapter 31 . 4/24/2020
Great story!
divyvicki chapter 30 . 4/24/2020
I’m surprised that Bella didn’t make sure to be at the photo shoot since she knew how Tanya felt about Edward
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