Reviews for Crushing
Guest chapter 32 . 7/4/2013
I cannot recommmend this story. I was very disappointed with it. I had checked the more recent reviews before reading it, and feel misled into giving it a try.

The character development was extremely weak. Character behaviors and actions were both inplausible and disturbing.

Almost decade older Edward having inappropriate feelings for a 16-year-old Bella, who was being raised as his sister, was just one of the disturbing, weak and immature plot points.

On a positive note: There were fewer grammatical, syntax and spelling errors than many fanfictions.
Cina's chapter 3 . 7/6/2013
Well it must be Ms model... But what was she doing out back. I agree with Dev she is no good. Well no one is good enough for Edward except Bella.
dwright chapter 32 . 7/6/2013
Great story. Thanks for writing.
emmzac chapter 32 . 7/6/2013
And now here I am at the end after reading reading and more reading :-) Thanks for sharing as I enjoyed reading this E&B journey and look forward to reading more from you :-)
Sanera chapter 32 . 7/5/2013
jazzcrank chapter 32 . 7/5/2013
I read this story all over again yesterday and urge funny thing that happened...2 days ago I went to the mall and got a Cinnabon and I finished eating it while reading about cinnabitch lol...this was a great story and i can't beileve I read the whole thing again...I rarely reresd fanfiction;)
VampireandWerewolfLover22 chapter 32 . 7/5/2013
I loved it! Well done and good luck with future stories, chapters, updates and writing. It was an amazing story! Well done once again. :)
shyshy1016 chapter 32 . 7/5/2013
I loved this story! It was amazing! I am so happy I came across it!
mimimgr chapter 32 . 7/4/2013
great ending... loved this story so.
JXB Addicted chapter 32 . 7/4/2013
That was awesome! It was a really sweet story! TTFN! JXB ;-}
Dollybigmomma chapter 32 . 7/4/2013
Very nice story. Lots of ups and downs, but definitely worth the ride!
AngeliqueMasen chapter 32 . 7/4/2013
Thank you for the update! Any chance of an out take of his purposal?
emmzac chapter 17 . 7/4/2013
I've been reading and reading and now I'm breaking down alongside Bella. It's been a rough journey but I know that love always wins out and I feel the love. Off to read more :-)
Guest chapter 32 . 7/1/2013
Guest chapter 32 . 7/1/2013
Crying !
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