Reviews for A Kick of Reality
Gracfully chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
so very awesome
Motherof8 chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Really loved this short story. Wish it were longer. Thanks for writing it,
JET20 chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
OMG I cried, this is such a powerful message. I am also a teenage mother and when I saw my little girl, she bought the light back into my life. Thank you for this beautiful story.
MandineF chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
It's a really beautiful story ! Well-written with an amazing plot ! Loved it !

Love from France
Darkest Original chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Loved the story and all of the flashbacks. Good job.
Luereetwilitejunki chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
I love this story! Thanks for writing it!
GorGirl chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
I'm glad they're all okay - happy even! Thanks for sharing your story!
shaz308 chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Thanks for a lovely story. Goodluck with the vote. Glad they kept the baby but sad for the couple still left waiting to adopt.
SapphireLily13 chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
That was beautiful. I was in shock, I laughed, I cried, I waited in suspense...

I'm very happy with the ending! I'm so glad I read this story, it was certainly a wonderful read.

:)
jilburfm chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
I really enjoyed this story. I loved when the baby kicked for Edward's voice in the middle of the accident. I was kinda hoping that they'd go through with the adoption though. And I really want to know what was going on in Edward's head through all this - the night in August, when the relationship starts to become real and if he was ever going to tell her anything and then what it was like to hear her change her mind.

Good luck with the contest!
GuestRai chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
A really dramatic story...

I don't believe that they are giving their baby up.

And I ask myself if it's really that simple for Bella to forgive Edward?

Perhaps we find out ;)
LogicalmindBigheart chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
This is truly beautiful and well-written. I had tears in my eyes. Absolutely great story!
Sweetie7smiled chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
This was neat; Thanks for writing!