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Darkest Original chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Loved the story, really. It was amazing but you left out why Bella left. If bella had woken up during this one shot then how would she have reacted to Edward knowing her daughter. So many things to think about. Are you dong a sequel or full length story from this?
shaz308 chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Why did she leave? Great story, goodluck with the vote.
susanpr chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
You left so much out. Why did she leave? Did she think Edward wouldn't want the child, and if so, why? What happens when shew comes to in the hospital? How does she explain to Carlie that she never told her family about her? I hope you continue this and answer these questions.
mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
I'm really confused. Why did Bella think that Edward wouldn't want the baby?
CaylenA chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
ahm, great writing, but you kinda need to elaborate more on the story details.. well, Good luck on the contest.. :D
melina-U chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Confusing, we still don't know why did she leave. and it's not a HEA like you put it on the summary.

You make Bella seem selfish. It's like the story is not complete, are you going to do a sequel?