|Reviews for Yours Always|
| Gabe Mason chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
This was like... WOW. And I was like... WOOOW! Loved it! I'm hoping for a second part!
| LadyofShips chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Please continue this oh my god I need to know what happens after PLEASE I BEG OF YOU! AS A HORMONAL TEENAGE GIRL WHO HAS ODDLY ENOUGH ALWAYS LOVED MIGUEL EVEN IN ELEMENTARY SCHOOL PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!
| Thecattygrl chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
That was excellent! Great descriptions and I love Miguel as a romantic. I'd be nice if you continued this.
| The Fabulous A.J chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
This was lovely! Sad you won't be continuing, I would've liked to see what happened.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
I loved it! You really should write a sequel about what happens when they try to leave.
| supaherolena02 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
i wanna a sequel '( it's soooo good!
| Ayako chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
I demand more! Seriously, it's so cute and sexy at the same time! You should write Tulio meeting the next morning. I bet it would be awkward and cute, and Miguels expression when he sees Tulio waiting for him would be glorious.
| isab1400 chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
This is soooooooo cuuuuute! PLeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaase can you write a sequel or something? I really want to know what happened!
| Luccass chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
| Lucas chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Omg omg omg continue please i need to know what happends
| Dragonballzgirl138810 chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Sequel? Yes please! :) I loved this!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
I really liked the way this story flowed, and the way you write is really descriptive and I can instantly picture everything that happens very well. The way the characters interact (not sexually, of course) was really nice, too. I found Tulio slightly out of character in terms of his empathy, but the way he was expressed as a character was well done.
The only criticism I have is how you express Miguel. In a sense, you almost made him TOO female. I'm not gay/bi, but Miguel is still a man regardless of his sexuality, and describing his physical attributes as those of a girl and making him act like a girl I found a tad bit offensive. I'm not trying to accuse you of anything, but:
"They were delicate, like woman's fingers would be. This just added to his building affection for the nameless man", "His curvy backside, thin shoulders, and toned stomach...", "This handwriting could've come from a woman for all he knew. It was loopy and fancy, And Tulio felt affection for the man surge in his chest. The letters were tiny, as to fit it all onto the bill"? The whole time I pictured Miguel as a woman rather than the man he is, and I found those descriptions really inaccurate for Miguel as a copyrighted character.
Not only that, but saying Tulio is attracted to those feminine features of Miguel kind of threw me off; unless he favors women over men since you're describing him as bisexual, usually gay men are attracted to gay men because they like masculinity, not femininity (though I don't speak for everyone). I'm not trying to start some gay rights movement war... thing... but I was merely stating a point. Sorry if I come off as a dick XD
Overall, though, I did like the story and despite me saying more about what I didn't like rather than what I did like, it would be nice if you did continue sometime soon. It's a nice concept and a unique one at that.
| Eliza the Writer chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
OH MY GOSH THIS IS AMAZING. YOU SERIOUSLY NEED TO CONTINUE IT. PLEASE?
| xBunni chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
That was cute. Thank you for the fluff, I loved it. Let me know if you ever get around to that continuation ;)
| Dplover13 chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
Please please please update soon! I love this!