|Reviews for Rising Dawn|
| Someone chapter 9 . 5/20
Bella's a bit of a bitch and is very selfish
| Midnight Ambrosia chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
Wait, I'm confused, they are ages 11-4? But Bella has to be carried? And Sam already has a gang? And Seth can speak almost fluently? -Not a flame- Just asking.
I like the first chapter still :
| Taylor9901 chapter 17 . 11/9/2014
I hope you complete this story. I'm not sure I like the idea of someone trying to break up an imprint. That can only do harm to them.
| Freoborn1980 chapter 17 . 10/26/2014
Okay no update for a few years...but you could continue soon..maybe please if you do NO triangle lol
| Freoborn1980 chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
Love the start
| Mike's Girl chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
I love this story! Please continue
| blakesmommy22 chapter 15 . 4/14/2014
Plz dont make a love triangle between bella, paul and this Xavier guy.
| Guest chapter 17 . 2/15/2014
Review please, sounds really good. So hooked.
| Avalon Starfire chapter 17 . 2/7/2014
NO love triangle. and i think Bella should put them in they're place and be the right alpha they need not a lil girl, NO love triangle with Jacob either...
| WallWatcher33 chapter 17 . 1/20/2014
| Maria Contreras chapter 17 . 12/5/2013
No. Plz update soon.
| destructive secret chapter 17 . 11/22/2013
No triangle please! I love Paul too much to do that to him. Thanks!
| PrincesitaVulturi chapter 17 . 11/7/2013
Podría ser que Bella y Paul se imprimen de Xavier y este siente algo parecido por ellos. Molaría mucho
| zaliyak chapter 17 . 8/12/2013
aw is this the end already cause this the story just started and if you ask me there needs to be more too this story!
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/4/2013
no love triangle please