Reviews for Lucky moon in the sky
Guest chapter 12 . 9/1/2012
i'm a bit confused after reading this. it is hard for me to follow. but i liked it and tried to read it all. i'm sorry, but i have lost the train that is this story.
Xxferessa-TanXx chapter 12 . 7/21/2012
just wait until kyoya came and bite those corrupt people and it would be plain hetic with varia i pray namimori citizen will keep sane after varia visit
Guest chapter 10 . 7/2/2012
pokerface chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
The moment this was mentioned: 'spiky black hair and wide, expressive caramel eyes'

I immedietly thought of tsuna n hibari's child! Anyway love it! :D
lollitha chapter 10 . 6/1/2012
Plese update soon!
Ashley chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
huh? tsuki? it's tsuna... 0.o
so embarrassing chapter 2 . 4/9/2012
This story has potential. Spelling is good. Work on your grammar, though. Also, you should space between paragraphs, not stick them together. Sticking your paragraphs makes readers take a look at your story, and leave. Also, your character is copied off of Tsuna. People don't like that. Change your character a bit.

Other than the things said above, your story is great :D I will follow your story and see what happens. Also, this is criticism, not a flame. So, don't get upset!