Reviews for Rite of Passage
patbor chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Loved it! Blair did become a man that day. Jim became more human as well.
Judy chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
Nice story. Very good description of action at the range. You obviously have shooting experience.
Starfishyeti chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
I really enjoyed the story - you have a good writing style that's easy to read.

I could see Blair dealing with his change in life in anthropological terms - let's face it, that's how he sees the world.

However, I feel that you put all the blame for the diss fiasco on Blair's shoulders and don't address how Jim did the same and through his actions forced Blair to renounce his dissertation. But everyone has their own view on the situation...

Anyway, thanks for the story.
Oya Yansa chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
This was fantastic! I loved it!
Brumeier chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
This was really, really good! I love how Jim took Blair in hand, pulling him up out of his funk and doing everything he could to fix things between them in a mostly non-verbal Jim way. The fancy breakfast, the gift of the gun and the even more important gift of the story he told Blair...just awesome.

Such a positive story to go with TS by BS, which I loathe. You totally made the whole thing much better. Thanks!