|Reviews for I Hate You Because|
| Kates24 chapter 1 . 3/7
Loved this! Fun, sweet and true to character.
| StarryNight101 chapter 1 . 1/26
Oh my god. This is kind of perfect. And hilarious. And I can totally picture it happening, and I love love love the snark. As much as I love pure fluff, fluff with a heavy side of snark is even better. Excellent story.
| PageofTarts chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
This was so sweet! Their "I hate you because" phrases felt real and raw. The bits where they were confessing how they felt abandoned by the other in their time of need really struck a cord. I thought you wrote Madison very well. I know Veronica hates her in the show but I don't see her as the evil of all evils. She's a person too-albeit one that often acts like a bitch. I laughed out loud when Logan told Veronica to "Go get 'em" re: Dick & Ashley. Logan's "Seriously, Dick? On my bed?" was perfect.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Great story! You write Veronica and Logan so well.
| becuzitswrong chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
That was so fun. Wonderful game you have there.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
This is perfect
| Jeanie205 chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
I love this fanfic. Very little exposition to break the mood. Just fabulous, effortless dialogue that first floats and then quickly rushes towards a complete reversal of their relationship.
How did you do that? The whole thing seems so damn natural.
Loved the book-ending regarding the pictures of Dick and Ashley. Logan's deleting them are what landed them in the pool in the first place. (Although within the context of your fic, and I guess the show, Logan will do just about anything to stay connected to Veronica In any way possible.) But then he helps Veronica get even more damning pictures at the end! Nice touch.
And of course Veronica's handing his head to Duncan. Wouldn't we all have loved to see that scene!
Hope you'll write more of these and please continue with your long story. I'm loving that one, too.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
The scent... Makes your story all the much better. I love that you included acute sensory details. I vividly imagined them as if they were in front of me, which is amazing because not many things have that effect on me. Thank you for a tremendously great LoVe fanfic, I enjoyed read it!
| viki chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Wow, that was an amazing story. I loved how the conversations were so realistic, the snarkiness and sarcasm was just dead on. Thanks for sharing that. I hope you write more veronica mars fanfic.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
It seems as though the sexual component was actually added when Logan refused to let her out of the pool in "hopes" of seeing Veronica in her underwear since he wondered what kind they were.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
If I may make a suggestion...
Could you do your own fluffy one shot version of Logan and Veronica after the Witchita Library scene in the third season? Please? Btw... You should have been one of the writers for Veronica Mars! You do justice to Veronica and Logan!
| Chibinini88 chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
BEST BEST BEST wow! awesome!
| Raven A. Evans chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
I LOVE LOVE LOOOOOVE Logan and Veronica! You excited about the Veronica Mars movie coming out next year?
| ELSchaaf chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
I love you and the perfection that you bring to our dearest OTP! Never stop!
| applemysteries chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
This should be illegal! Veronica and Logan fics simply aren't allowed to make people smile this much! I want to thank you for writing the first mostly in character unabashedly happy LoVe fic that I have read in AGES. It was such a refreshing change of pace, yet still had enough angst to be our own heartbreakingly tragic Logan and Veronica. Also, we got to see Dick who was in character as well! *sigh* If only Veronica and Logan had resolved their issues like this in the show, they could have saved themselves a lot of pain... well, maybe not. It is Neptune after all.
Anyway, great fic I throughly enjoyed every moment of it! I even have the urge to swim, make-out and play drinking games now!