|Reviews for Pain|
| Mrs Potter-Jackson-Holmes chapter 3 . 2/27/2013
| Madame Penguin chapter 3 . 12/8/2012
For style format, instead of making long chapter you could always do a small short paragraph each day and post it like this story I read called Without You on Fictionpress just to give you an idea. You don't have to follow a direct story line and write how you feel/think the character would react.
The penname is the same as my username on here if you want to PM more about your thoughts
| Kenjo chapter 3 . 11/23/2012
Ooohhh... Nice! Update soon please!:)
| Katconan chapter 3 . 11/7/2012
Great story but please update more and have longer chapters.
| She-Who-Lives-in-TheMadhouse chapter 2 . 7/5/2012
Sweet as it is but still small. And two reviews for such an enticing letter is not much. Why don't you continue?
| Mrs Potter-Jackson-Holmes chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
WOW these are so like detailed and deep. R u going to write more. That would be great
| Shannon the Original chapter 2 . 4/22/2012
Great chapter Update soon:)
| Shannon the Original chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
| Mrs Potter-Jackson-Holmes chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
thats good but is that it?