Reviews for Jealousy
ShadySithis chapter 3 . 11/27
Pretty goo for a first
Guest chapter 3 . 4/17/2016
Nice writter
Sinthia1123 chapter 3 . 4/27/2015
i love it!
AngelEyes1864 chapter 3 . 12/11/2014
Lost inspiration?! After three chapters?! Don't just post the first thing that comes into your mind no matter how sucky it is coz it'll sound forced. I'm not big on giving up but there's literally nothing you can do to fix this. You might as well rewrite it
Bob Frank chapter 3 . 5/4/2014
That was a wierd ending
Siayanna chapter 3 . 9/22/2013
awesome214 chapter 3 . 9/14/2013
awesome214 chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
I like it
MagicGold34 chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Well, that escalated quickly.
ahhhhhhhhhhh chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
it would be really funny if jason ran up and stabbed him but MISSED when he was about 2 inches away and percy [the amazing, hot, loyal, brave, heroic, GOD sitting over there (sorry annabeth its either Leo, Nico, or Percy. Guess who?)] pulled out his awesome sword riptide, and stabbed him and he died right there and then. then all the campers lined up to stomp on the idiotic son of jupiters FACE AND KICKED HIS DEAD LITTLE F***ING %#! AND THEIR ALL SMILING LIKE IN THE CARTOONS WITH CRAZY LOOKS ON THEIR FACES. THEN PIPER WALKS UP AND SAYS 'I NEVER LOVED YOU, YOU IGNORANT LITTLE DEVIOUS PIECE OF SH*T! I LOVED LEO ALL ALONG!' *QUE CRAZY LAUGH!* HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!- whoa...overboard...sorry...I don't like THAT LITTLE...I mean...uh...jason. i don't like jason. AT ALL. again. im sooooooooo sorry!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
U forgot the golden fleece
TakeALookInTheMirrorYouUgly chapter 3 . 9/25/2012
Isn't supposed to be JASON'S POV in the first part of chapter 3?
PercabethAndZebrasFTW chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
It's pretty good so far! I'd like it even more if it was longer, though. ;)

ADayWithNoLaughterIsADayWasted chapter 3 . 6/8/2012
haha no it was good! :D
shadespace chapter 3 . 6/7/2012
Percy's POV:

"And it was just a big misunderstanding." Percy and I finished in unison as he disarmed me

u have that wrong it should be jason's pov when this is said

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