Reviews for Mercy on the Foundling
Guest chapter 5 . 10/29/2012
extremely good :p keep it up:)
dance.till.i.drop chapter 7 . 9/29/2012
Very nice. I like the Corus orphans focus. Very impressive. Keep up the good work!
Path.Wanderer chapter 7 . 9/7/2012
Great story, there is sense present. Thank you for the 7 chapters.
Purple Majestic chapter 7 . 5/29/2012
i like this story.
rabbitlavell chapter 7 . 5/6/2012
I can't wait to read more! Though it does seem a little bit choppy. Perhaps put a little bit more words to make the story flow smoothly? Love it!
Guest chapter 7 . 4/24/2012
Please please keep going...It's really good, and I wanna know what happens with Kitten. Only word of advice, it seems a tiny bit choppy, but the dialouges good
K chapter 5 . 4/17/2012
please keep going! i really want to find whose was the voice. and i really can't think of anything you could improve on, except maybe putting up the next part of the story.

Hi chapter 5 . 4/13/2012
can you please update?

i do need something to read.

I was so excited when I saw chapter 5

please continue
Megan chapter 4 . 4/11/2012
I love this and hope you will continue to add to it.