Reviews for Paranormal Activity 4: Goasts in Space
TekkitDoOd008 chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
Okay, first off, the grammer COULDN'T BE SHITTIER. Second, the plot is HORRIBLE. I mean really? Ghosts in space? You couldn't come up with something better? The grammer, punctuation, and wording is godawful. What the hell is a 'goast'? You don't know anybody's name. It is terrible. I STRONGLY suggest you stop writing fanfiction, you illiterate, incompetent fuck.
SilentScreams98 chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
It's good! There's quite a lot of spelling mistakes, and it would be nice if we had some character profiles. But overall, the plot is very good.