Reviews for First Day
KND Operative Numbuh 227 chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
You're welcome. Zach and Maddy are great kids. Oh and I am gonna use them for a time-travel story I'm planning, but that will be after I have introduced a few OCs.
Depthcharge2030 chapter 3 . 7/30/2012
Nice ending. A touching father-son story. Villains really need to stop extending their plans. Well, I never intially thought of Crystal being British...but it actually works...although I now want to know what she's up to. Overall, awesome story.
Depthcharge2030 chapter 2 . 7/28/2012
Sweet a second chapter. It seems history shall repeat itself...or will it?
arissaprincess321 chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
your creativity won't be beat by author's block. No sir it doesn't back down in the face of an author's block:)
Depthcharge2030 chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Arctic training at the poles. I say this here was an awesome story. So, Azelf's gaurdian is one of the Uno's.