Reviews for Aveilit
mon-petit-pois chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
This is so sad... Good job.
Tiva lovah chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Oh my god that story took my breath away- so raw and beautiful and true and I have tears in my eyes! The last line made me gasp- oh Ziva! So well done! Maybe we'll get a new chapter of treading water too ;)
Sasha Elizabeth chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
So excited to read more!
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
What a sad, sad piece of Ziva's history.

And the terrible thing is, I can see this or something similar having happened.

You have looked into Eli's shriveled little soul and seen the truth!

Good story.
ChEmMiE chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
OMG! Just read this and absolutely LOOOVE IT! (That very last sentence, though? SAAAAD!)

I scrolled back up to see whether it was completed or not (cause I was REALLY hoping that it wasn't), and noticed that it was another one of your stories! I gotta say, I really DO love your writing/stories!

But I totally agree! I'm completely convinced that her childhood looked a lot like this... In the first few seasons after Ziva joined, that is the impression the writers gave us... but lately it seems that they're regretted it, and are trying to make her childhood seem much happier etc...
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