Reviews for Temporal Tide |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Watching Bella try desperately to stay with Tatyana at the end was heartbreaking. However, I absolutely loved it. I also loved Bella and Emily meeting for real. I want to see what will happen next with Victoria! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I loved the wolves! That interaction was spectacular! Especially when Emily came home and Bella almost lost it; that was hilarious! I'm very curious how her disappearance looked to the wolves though... Does her body disappear? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an interesting chapter because I felt there wasn't any life-threatening reason for Bella to be in Tanya's life. Previously, it seemed she was there to keep Tanya alive. It was also different that she stayed for what, a month? That was strange. I did like that they were able to create a bond, a mutual friendship, but I'm failing to understand what is bringing Bella to Tanya. Oh! But their relationship actually reminds me a lot of Quil and Claire. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm also very curious why Tanya seems to be the connecting force to Bella's time traveling. With the Seattle events, is Victoria still creating her army? Or is she just angry and taking it out on the city? And who is going to react to the rampage? Perhaps the Denali's? I'm kind of curious when Bella is going to start venturing out of the forest and travel around a bit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought the aggressive nature of Bella's training and knowledge of what she is and the alternative choices she could make, added up to a very logical amount of control in this fic. I also love the deep historical aspects you're including. The time travel, especially how Bella hasn't realized that's what's happening yet, is fascinating. I'm excited to see Tanya grow up with Bella as an added influence in her life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an interesting concept. I'm very curious to know if Bella truly went back in time or simply slipped into a memory of some sort. But then how did she interact with the child? And it appears that the sound Victoria made someone caused the shift? Fascinating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really like this story, hopefully you update it someday. |
![]() ![]() Omg you updated! I was rereading this story before I realized you added new chapters, I can’t tell you what a wonderful surprise that was. It’s been a rough week, and I haven’t read any fanfics in a long time. I figured I’d reread one of my old favorites and I’m so glad I did. Your story is so good, and unique, I hope you know it makes atleast one reader very happy. Hope the muse hits you again because reading the new stuff has me hooked all over again ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just wanted to say thank you for writing all that you have. It’s been an amazing read. I love this story and I can’t wait to read the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I binge read this and it was absolutely amazing from chapter 1 to 20. I mean the emotion practically leaps of the page and I just adore the work you put into the development of the bond between Bella and Tanya. I cannot begin to address how delicious the plot is and how cool Bellas power is. Love how defensive tanya is and her reaction to Mari appearing over the years. Fanfuckingtastic writing overall. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is fantastic. Hope you think about continuing. |
![]() ![]() This is still one of the best pieces in fanfiction I’ve read and I really hope you continue this. I’ve been reading this since chapter 1 and I hope you eventually finish it ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() i miss you! lol. how youre having a blast. ill patiently wait for an update |
![]() ![]() ![]() i sad that the story is dead |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, hope all is well. I love this story. Are you planning to update it? Thank you |