The ending for this chapter is cute. Hmmm at least bella now know the consequences of voltouri

Vampires that actually used their brains. The human inspector with the camera is brilliant. The way the Denali handled that murder, cameras, laptop and data was masterful. No many fics give detail on how they protect their secret. Well done. Tech savvy vamps

If bella goes to the present can she take anything from the past? Like the robe or stuff. It'll be museum type if she did

It feels divine. It feels holy and warm, the way priests said worship should feel, but I've only ever felt that way when I'm with you. - SMOOTH TANYA

In a period where a relationship between two men or women was reviled and punishable by death; defying taboo would be difficult. - I Forgot homophobia is rampant on those times. Ohhh with Bella's time travel I hope they'll be on the first pride March or something. Thatll be cool. or them kissing in public in the past and making girls question their sexuality hahahahha

"Anything you could possibly desire, I can give you." hell yeah sugar mommy Tanya and sugar baby Bella HAHAHAHHAHA

Hmmm bella is too naive with this no killing bullsht

So, stay here, and I'll be right back."

"I'll wait for you." I vowed, more solemnly than originally intended.

Tanya paused, her hand on the handle, before she turned and gazed at me with quiet yearning.

"Do you promise?" The whisper was soft, but earnest.

Recognizing the weight of the moment, I reached out and lightly caressed Tanya's cheek.

"I promise." I murmured back, feeling the resolve solidify in my chest.

For a moment, I thought I saw a glimmer of tears; but she lowered her head and turned to place a reverent kiss on the palm of my hand.

"I'll be right back." She breathed, placing one last kiss on my fingers before exiting the car

Fuck I'm a sucker for soft moments like this! I hope they'll have multiple chapters of just soft epilogue of their everyday life like bella doing a bucket list with the Denali, bella fading in inappropriate times, bella and the Denali's in the past and their shinanegans. Tanya deserve it. Imagine past Tanya and the dread she'll have with every moments with Bella knowing she'll possible go any minute now.

Awwwww

You will stop this foolishness at once. Your ceaseless fixation on this woman has gone too far. She has abandoned you over and over again yet still you pine. The only true love in this world is the bond of love between family. Lovers are temporary distractions, take your pleasure from them, but never forget that family is forever.

Bella your mother in law may be a jerk but she's right

Her past travel is getting shorter

Bella is lucky she met her mate in different stages of life of tanya

A-B-C-D-E-F-G
A- past
D - present
G - future

By Bella's power, will she systemically just go back to the past till she reach the present? D to A, E to B, F to G
Or will she have freedom to visit like D to C, E to A etc
When bella was born did the time jumping stopped? Like there 2 bella in the timeline so they can't be together shit like that.
Can bella jump to the future?

I do feel bad for Tanya since she can't be with her mate for 1000 years and now in the present she'll have to share with her past self. And present Tanya will have to wait for present bella to catch up with the "last bella/future bella" that Tanya saw. It'll be funny if bella can control it and be like in an argument "hmp this is stupid I'm going to 11 year old to charge my battery of cuteness" or something like that hahaha

I wonder what happened since Kate said that she hasn't seen bella for several hundred years. Irina and Tanya said they haven't seen her since the industrial period. Tanya mentioned a hundred year estimate. So they separated for a while?

If travelling in the past is tethered to Tanya, coming back to the present is tethered to what? Bella sometimes go back to where she was last but this time she came back to Denali where Tanya is after the airport. Soooo wouldn't she come back to where Tanya is in the present?

I'm just so intrigued with your story and it has lots of potential that's why I have so many questions hahahha

Tanya is right. Thinking about it the life of a woman in the 1000 years before is cruel. If it were me I'll also choose vampirism

THEY MEET YES! now the question is, Bella's power of time travel linear or parallel? Like does anything she do in the past already done in her future or does anything she do makes a difference and make a new future?

I love that at least bella is there for some of the important moments in Tanya's life. A bit of a down tho that she's didn't stay for long again

Tanya's gonna develop abandonment issues. Aww the past trip is too short. I hope bella can control it so she can visit Tanya