Reviews for Temporal Tide |
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![]() ![]() Sorry if I'm mistaken but I thought you had this posted on AO3 as well? I don't see it there anymore I'm not sure if you deleted it or if it's something weird in my end. Oh well. I hope life is going well for you, take all the time you need but I do look forward to any updates :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this chapter was amazing! As usual, you never disappoint. As infuriating as the conversation between Bella and Edward was, it was satisfying as well for her to shut him down. And the heartfelt moment later on between Tanya and her in the cellar was so sweet! I do feel bad for Bella a bit, but it’s not as if you can blame Tanya for her past flings- and as she said her heart has always been Bella’s. And I think I see something bc budding between Fred and Irina, if I’m not mistaken? I hope so! She deserves a happy ending as well, and since Kate has Garret, and Tanya has Bella, it’s really sweet to see you’ve maybe found a match for Irina as well! This story is unfolding so beautifully, as I said in my last guest review- you finally convinced me to log in to my account to leave proper praise for you! To anyone starting this fic and reading this comment- you don’t know how wonderful this story is, hope you enjoy it as much as I do :) Once again, thanks for the wonderful update, and I can’t wait to read more when you decide to bless your readers again ️ |
![]() ![]() OMG HELL YES! Just checked back in to reread this fic for the hundredth time and saw another new chapter! I’m so excited for this re-read! There’s nothing better than every now and then when I come back to your story and see you’ve updated again. Seriously, please keep up the great work (at your own pace, of course) and I hope you know how happy you’ve made one of your readers :D I think I’ll log into my account (long abandoned lol) just so I can leave a proper review! For now- glumgirl3452 ️ can’t wait to re-read it and enjoy the new chapter! Thanks again for being awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() I need tanya to at the very least rip one of Ed’s arms off or maybe his lips so he’ll stop running his mouth for a bit lol |
![]() ![]() So, the talk w/Edward… I loved how she emphasized that she didn’t want him. Keep up the great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the update is the best part of my day!thanks for writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see an update. This story has been a gem. I hope that if they're going to be in an "open" relationship Bella also takes advantage of that. I feel like she needs to get some experience under her belt to handle Tanya. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This update was great. Love that Bella is opening up more. I'm glad she didn't run back to Edward cause he doesn't deserve sympathy in this story. Tanya is so soft with Bella it's so great. Can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how open bella is becoming with Tanya, and I especially love that she didn't head back to Edward or was conflicted about the situation. Edward didn't deserve her after he left in such a manner. unprotected and alone without anyone to confide in. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() Спасибо за обновление! |
![]() ![]() I've been reading this story on and off for the past nine years, and everytime I come back to it I get the treat of it being updated and being able to reread it all the way through again, and I love it. This is such a great story, and it's amazing and fantastic you're still updating it and haven't given it up or anything. Take as many breaks as you need in between chapters cause this story is a treasure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful as always, I’m so pleased you didn’t abandon this story, I know life happens to us all and as a writer myself, I can hardly blame you for the long wait but as a reader and huge fan of this work, pretty please don’t make me wait so long for the next chapters? I actually really liked the talk with Edward, I’ve read lots of Bella femslash stories (mostly Rosella) and I don’t think anyone has tackled a conversation with Bella and Edward quite like you did. Some are fantastic don’t get me wrong but there was something really ‘real’ about the way you had both characters approaching the other. I sensed Edwards’ regret and desperation easily and Bella’s frustration and resolve too. Honestly I liked how you kinda had her choose not to love him again, that’s what was so unusual about this scene compared to the others. Bella is hurting still, rightfully so, but I think you had her sort of decide that she wanted something else for herself, and to almost spite Edward by saying ‘yeah I could love you again, but I’m choosing not to because I want more than what you can offer’. It was pretty powerful stuff. Moving onto the scenes with Tanya, my gay little heart swelled ten sizes at their brief interactions. But I love how you subtly show Bella’s growing fondness and sense of belonging with the Denali as a whole. In this chapter, it was so nice to see present Bella recognising her adoration for Kate and Irina, and seeing their love and playfulness in return. Anyway this was really long, but I know it makes my day when people leave me comments like this so… Thanks again for the story, it’s absolutely epic and honestly one of the best on this site or the AO3 site I’ve ever read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooo! Another chapter! I'm going to have to go back and reread everything again as my brain has forgotten what has happened, however it feels good to see that Edward has gotten the talk down from Bella. Thank you for continuing to share your work! -Shadow |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is always a joy to see and update on this story. I have been waiting to see when Tanya’s past was going to be discussed. It was a good talk but so much was left unsaid on Tanya’s side. I know we needed to understand what Bella wanted and I know Tanya is trying not to tell Bella too much as to not change anything from there past. I look forward to see what happens when Bella takes another trip back to the past. The Edward conversation was as expected. I didn’t think he would hold back trying to try to sway or persuade Bella. Is he going to stay traveling with them? Will Tanya and him have an argument. Will he know about Bella and Tanya’s past? So many questions. I can’t wait for the next update! |