Reviews for Betrothal |
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![]() ![]() Bro why would you do that bro. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What will happen to Emmett? Will he eventually take the crown or is his rule null and void? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I again thought this chapter was extremely well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There’s absolutely no reason to not be happy with this chapter. It was written very well and I enjoyed it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed reading the blend between Young Victoria and Edward and Bella. Such a fantastic story you created. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this as a period piece. I'm bothered by the ending despite the fact that such things did occur. It was just such a sweet, if stiff, story and then, BAM... tragedy. Oh well...sigh... thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This made me cry! It was very real, but very sad, as well. Great story, thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's was so beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If Charlie and Rene are cousins then that would be incest for Bella and Edward to marry they would be related yuk. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story |
![]() ![]() why are you so cruel! i cried at the end! but like seriously you are the best fanfic writer ever |
![]() ![]() ![]() such a great story. the end of it sure did sucker punch me in the heart .. very well written |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man. Drinking alcohol when pregnant. Those were the days. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh what a story! I couldn’t stop reading it! It was sooo wonderful! |