Reviews for Betrothal
Guest chapter 28 . 11/9/2024
Bro why would you do that bro.
JD Thorn chapter 19 . 6/16/2024
What will happen to Emmett? Will he eventually take the crown or is his rule null and void?
JD Thorn chapter 6 . 6/15/2024
I again thought this chapter was extremely well written.
JD Thorn chapter 5 . 6/15/2024
There’s absolutely no reason to not be happy with this chapter. It was written very well and I enjoyed it a lot.
Ajfflady chapter 28 . 5/6/2024
I really enjoyed reading the blend between Young Victoria and Edward and Bella. Such a fantastic story you created.
WordsMusicMagic chapter 28 . 1/11/2023
I liked this as a period piece. I'm bothered by the ending despite the fact that such things did occur. It was just such a sweet, if stiff, story and then, BAM... tragedy. Oh well...sigh... thanks for sharing.
Just Sus chapter 28 . 11/5/2022
This made me cry! It was very real, but very sad, as well. Great story, thank you!
soniya11 chapter 28 . 8/31/2020
That's was so beautiful!
yitu chapter 28 . 6/26/2020
Beautiful story.
vampirelady13 chapter 1 . 6/16/2020
If Charlie and Rene are cousins then that would be incest for Bella and Edward to marry they would be related yuk.
sportswritergirl chapter 28 . 1/16/2020
Wonderful story
edward'sWIFEY chapter 28 . 11/2/2019
why are you so cruel! i cried at the end! but like seriously you are the best fanfic writer ever
americannight99 chapter 1 . 10/1/2019
such a great story. the end of it sure did sucker punch me in the heart .. very well written
TheEasternWind chapter 15 . 9/18/2019
Oh man. Drinking alcohol when pregnant. Those were the days.
bella's beta chapter 28 . 4/13/2019
Oh what a story! I couldn’t stop reading it! It was sooo wonderful!
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