nice.

nice really hate Vic can you do one with Teddy/Lily and Lucy but where Lily wins.

so sad and now I hate Rose. That's ok she's always been my second lest fav after Victorie.

This was so breathtakingly beautiful. I love this part

as your hear cleanly down the middle

but no.

it's no at all.

rip an scream and crash

I never really cared much about these pairings but I fell in love with this fic.

I don't think I've ever read freeverse before but I really enjoyed this. The language you used is amazing, really fits the scene. I like the characters you used as well, I like the freedom you have with the NextGen.

Well done!

Really cute,your use of bold, italicize and capitalization of characters/words was very well done. If anything,you might have used a few too many parentheses, but overall very good story, and very realistic ending with a touch of fantasy due to the rhyme. :)

I love this. I honest to god, love this.

It's so beautiful and poetic and so tragic.

I don't even like lily but..I can even. It was just wonderful

My favorite part was probably the last bit :

Shatter,silence

And a whispered plea

( I love you but you don't love me)

Write more please :)

-Alice xx

OMG, this is so amazing! you are such a genius! :)

Heart-breakingly good. I like! You should right more about other pairings as this is good. I think there should be more reviews as there is more than 2 people who have read this. Keep it up, i like poems :)

Awww. That's so sad! I like how you used a lot of figurative language. My favorite line was probably:

she got th you got the heartache

and he got th girl that you never were.

because it's just so sweet and sad. Nice job, looking forward to what you have next! _